神马作文网求帮忙找一下这个的语法错误,把改好的发过来
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求帮忙找一下这个的语法错误,把改好的发过来
N:This a play of MH370,we are sorry about it,please everybody can be serious ,serious and serious.(N leave)
A:Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to the flight from Malaysia to China.Now is Beijing time 0:42,and we will be landing at about 6:30.The flight will take about 6 hours.We hope you will enjoy this flight!Thank you!
M1:Hi Mom I’m boarding,I will return home at morning.
M2:Son,you’d better sleep now,this will be a long journey,you need to have a rest.
M1:Sir yes sir.
N:Suddenly.(Gently)
Change to Cockpit
CA:Control department,this is MH370.We arrived in Vietnam,do you copy?
CA:It not response.
CB:What`s up?
CA:Oh I`m afraid we have lose contact.
CB:I`ll tell every things to our members.(pick up the mike）Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,we have lose contact with the ground.But may be we will contact them soon.
N:8 hours later.(Gently)
CA:Where are we now?
CB:No idea.Some thing bad,we don`t have none Aviation fuel now,we will falling soon.
CA:Oh!God!
AN:MH370 fell into the sea and no one alive,16 day later on the press conference.
P:I was very sad to tell you that the MH370 has crash and no one alive,please the news media think of their families`s feelings.
PF:Why,Why did this happen?(sadly and cry)
AN:The end,this thing is too sad.As they mourn.(sad and slowly)
THE END
N:This a play of MH370,we are sorry about it,please everybody can be serious ,serious and serious.(N leave)
A:Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to the flight from Malaysia to China.Now is Beijing time 0:42,and we will be landing at about 6:30.The flight will take about 6 hours.We hope you will enjoy this flight!Thank you!
M1:Hi Mom I’m boarding,I will return home at morning.
M2:Son,you’d better sleep now,this will be a long journey,you need to have a rest.
M1:Sir yes sir.
N:Suddenly.(Gently)
Change to Cockpit
CA:Control department,this is MH370.We arrived in Vietnam,do you copy?
CA:It not response.
CB:What`s up?
CA:Oh I`m afraid we have lose contact.
CB:I`ll tell every things to our members.(pick up the mike）Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,we have lose contact with the ground.But may be we will contact them soon.
N:8 hours later.(Gently)
CA:Where are we now?
CB:No idea.Some thing bad,we don`t have none Aviation fuel now,we will falling soon.
CA:Oh!God!
AN:MH370 fell into the sea and no one alive,16 day later on the press conference.
P:I was very sad to tell you that the MH370 has crash and no one alive,please the news media think of their families`s feelings.
PF:Why,Why did this happen?(sadly and cry)
AN:The end,this thing is too sad.As they mourn.(sad and slowly)
THE END
N:This is a play of MH370,we feel very pity about it. Can everybody please be serious ,serious and serious? Thank you!(N leave)
A:Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to the flight from Malaysia to China. Now it's Beijing time 0:42, and we will land at about 6:30. The flight will take about 6 hours. We hope you enjoy this flight! Thank you!
M1:Hi Mom I’m on board,I will arrive home in the morning.
M2:Son, you’d better sleep now. This will be a long journey,you need to have a rest.
M1:Sir yes sir.
N:Suddenly.(Gently)
Change to Cockpit
CA:Control department,this is MH370.We arrived in Vietnam,do you copy?
CA:It does not response.
CB:What`s up?
CA:Oh I`m afraid we have lose the contact.
CB:I`ll tell everything to our members.(pick up the microphone）Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,we have lose the contact with the ground. But may be we will contact them soon.
N:8 hours later.(Gently)
CA:Where are we now?
CB:No idea.Something bad has happened. We have none Aviation fuel now, we will crash soon.
CA:Oh!God!
AN:MH370 fell into the sea and no one survived.16 day later on the press conference.
P:I am very sad to tell you that the MH370 has crashed and no one survived, the press please consider their families`s feelings.
PF:Why,Why did this happen?(sadly and cry)
AN:The end,it is too sad.As they mourn.(sad and slowly)
THE END
只是改了一些语法错误,和一些不恰当的用词,不敢改太多.所以有些句子还是显得很别扭.但如果我改太多,就不是你们自己创作的剧本了!
A:Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to the flight from Malaysia to China. Now it's Beijing time 0:42, and we will land at about 6:30. The flight will take about 6 hours. We hope you enjoy this flight! Thank you!
M1:Hi Mom I’m on board,I will arrive home in the morning.
M2:Son, you’d better sleep now. This will be a long journey,you need to have a rest.
M1:Sir yes sir.
N:Suddenly.(Gently)
Change to Cockpit
CA:Control department,this is MH370.We arrived in Vietnam,do you copy?
CA:It does not response.
CB:What`s up?
CA:Oh I`m afraid we have lose the contact.
CB:I`ll tell everything to our members.(pick up the microphone）Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen,we have lose the contact with the ground. But may be we will contact them soon.
N:8 hours later.(Gently)
CA:Where are we now?
CB:No idea.Something bad has happened. We have none Aviation fuel now, we will crash soon.
CA:Oh!God!
AN:MH370 fell into the sea and no one survived.16 day later on the press conference.
P:I am very sad to tell you that the MH370 has crashed and no one survived, the press please consider their families`s feelings.
PF:Why,Why did this happen?(sadly and cry)
AN:The end,it is too sad.As they mourn.(sad and slowly)
THE END
只是改了一些语法错误,和一些不恰当的用词,不敢改太多.所以有些句子还是显得很别扭.但如果我改太多,就不是你们自己创作的剧本了!