神马作文网求检查语法错误和进行美化修改··· 各位高手见笑了!
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求检查语法错误和进行美化修改··· 各位高手见笑了!
Out of mypassion of marketing, I’d like to work in marketing or sales industry. So Ialways do some case study in my spare time, for accessing to the real businesssituations. For example, I got some cases that Ogilvy did for other companies, suchas IBM E-Commerce Integrated Campaign. Besides, I have learnt operation of somesoftware by myself. When I was a freshman at university, I am a computerrookie. But now I am skilled at operation of PowerPoint Excel and Photoshop. SoI have the strong learning skill.
Out of mypassion of marketing, I’d like to work in marketing or sales industry. So Ialways do some case study in my spare time, for accessing to the real businesssituations. For example, I got some cases that Ogilvy did for other companies, suchas IBM E-Commerce Integrated Campaign. Besides, I have learnt operation of somesoftware by myself. When I was a freshman at university, I am a computerrookie. But now I am skilled at operation of PowerPoint Excel and Photoshop. SoI have the strong learning skill.
这种建议先去过了语法检查软件再贴出来,比如1Checker什么的.
工具自动挑出来的错：at "the" university,I "was" a computer rookie.my passion "for" markering
机器改不出来的错误就有些多了,比如 i have learnt operation of...operation是操作的名词形式,用在这里很不恰当,应该是对着中文翻译的吧,直接说how to use就行了.the strong learning skill也不对,首先the不特指,另外这一看又是从“很强的学习能力”强行翻过来的Chinglish,英语里面的通俗说法是 I am a quick learner.for accessing to the real business situations.这句话我没看懂你想说什么,accessing只能接information,这里和situation搭配是肯定不对的
工具自动挑出来的错：at "the" university,I "was" a computer rookie.my passion "for" markering
机器改不出来的错误就有些多了,比如 i have learnt operation of...operation是操作的名词形式,用在这里很不恰当,应该是对着中文翻译的吧,直接说how to use就行了.the strong learning skill也不对,首先the不特指,另外这一看又是从“很强的学习能力”强行翻过来的Chinglish,英语里面的通俗说法是 I am a quick learner.for accessing to the real business situations.这句话我没看懂你想说什么,accessing只能接information,这里和situation搭配是肯定不对的