神马作文网这篇自我介绍有没有语法错误?
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这篇自我介绍有没有语法错误?
Hello,everybody , glad to be your classmate ! Now let me introduce myself here .
My name is XXX, and my English name is XXX. I’m a local student who is graduate from the No. 3 middle school , and I am a out going boy , and you can see me smile happily almost everyday !
In my spare time , I always play with computer , and I like animation very much . But now I seldom play computer games . My second biggest dream is to be a computer engineer ,as for the biggest dream , it’s a secret !
Soft music is also my favorite , so when I feel tired , I’m always lie down and listen to “New Age” music , such as Bandari 、Secrets Garden and S.E.N.S. ,because they can give my soul power . I’m very happy to share them with you !
That is me , a common but not commonplace boy. That’s all , thank you.
拜托了!下午要用到!
Hello,everybody , glad to be your classmate ! Now let me introduce myself here .
My name is XXX, and my English name is XXX. I’m a local student who is graduate from the No. 3 middle school , and I am a out going boy , and you can see me smile happily almost everyday !
In my spare time , I always play with computer , and I like animation very much . But now I seldom play computer games . My second biggest dream is to be a computer engineer ,as for the biggest dream , it’s a secret !
Soft music is also my favorite , so when I feel tired , I’m always lie down and listen to “New Age” music , such as Bandari 、Secrets Garden and S.E.N.S. ,because they can give my soul power . I’m very happy to share them with you !
That is me , a common but not commonplace boy. That’s all , thank you.
拜托了!下午要用到!
and I am a out going boy ,and you can see me smile happily almost everyday !
感觉有点别扭,不过应该算不上语法错误.
I always play with computer,觉得用with不好,with一般是和人或动物.
second biggest dream 感觉有点问题.
I’m always lie down 明显的错误,应该是I always lie down
because they can give my soul power 其中my改成me
基本还可以了,我的英语也不是很好,希望能帮上你
感觉有点别扭,不过应该算不上语法错误.
I always play with computer,觉得用with不好,with一般是和人或动物.
second biggest dream 感觉有点问题.
I’m always lie down 明显的错误,应该是I always lie down
because they can give my soul power 其中my改成me
基本还可以了,我的英语也不是很好,希望能帮上你