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帮忙看看这几句话怎么表达好 .
1.Hobby
1）What's your favorite hobby
2）What makes you fond of it?
3）How often do you do it （大概隔多长时间进行一次）
4）What 's the benefits do you get from the hobby （让你从爱好中受益的事情是什么）
5)Do you want share your benefits with others Why and how
2.tourist attraction (旅游胜地）
1）If you have a chance to travel one of tourist attractions in the world ,where do you prefer to go （如果你有机会去地球上的任何一个地方,你会选择去哪?）
2）What will you do （你会在那个地方做些什么）
3）How long will you stay （你会在那停留多长时间）
4）What is the actual reason that stops you from going there now
5）If a new tourist attraction occurs to your brains someday ,will you take it as your preferred place?（如果有一天 想到一个新的旅游胜地 你还会把（原来的）作为首选之地吗?）
3.Money&Happiness
1）How do you think about money （你对钱是怎么理解的）
2)If you have got a sum of money ,what will you do first thing?（如果你中奖得到一笔钱,你最想做的事情是什么）
3)If there is a dying child need the money ,will you like to donate the money to save the child (如果一个生命垂危的孩子正好急需这笔钱,你愿意拿这笔钱救这个孩子吗?
4)Do you think money has a close relationship to happiness?（你认为钱和幸福关系很密切吗）
5)When would you feel the most happiest （你认为最幸福的事情是什么）
句子肯定有问题，就是改病句
1.Hobby
1）What's your favorite hobby
2）What makes you fond of it?
3）How often do you do it （大概隔多长时间进行一次）
4）What 's the benefits do you get from the hobby （让你从爱好中受益的事情是什么）
5)Do you want share your benefits with others Why and how
2.tourist attraction (旅游胜地）
1）If you have a chance to travel one of tourist attractions in the world ,where do you prefer to go （如果你有机会去地球上的任何一个地方,你会选择去哪?）
2）What will you do （你会在那个地方做些什么）
3）How long will you stay （你会在那停留多长时间）
4）What is the actual reason that stops you from going there now
5）If a new tourist attraction occurs to your brains someday ,will you take it as your preferred place?（如果有一天 想到一个新的旅游胜地 你还会把（原来的）作为首选之地吗?）
3.Money&Happiness
1）How do you think about money （你对钱是怎么理解的）
2)If you have got a sum of money ,what will you do first thing?（如果你中奖得到一笔钱,你最想做的事情是什么）
3)If there is a dying child need the money ,will you like to donate the money to save the child (如果一个生命垂危的孩子正好急需这笔钱,你愿意拿这笔钱救这个孩子吗?
4)Do you think money has a close relationship to happiness?（你认为钱和幸福关系很密切吗）
5)When would you feel the most happiest （你认为最幸福的事情是什么）
句子肯定有问题，就是改病句
修改建议：
1.Hobby
1）What's your favorite hobby
2）What makes you fond of it?
3）How often do you do it （大概隔多长时间进行一次）
4）What benefits did you get from the hobby （让你从爱好中受益的事情是什么）
5) Would you like to share your benefits with others Why and how
2.tourist attraction (旅游胜地）
1）If you have a chance to visit any tourist attractions in the world ,where would you prefer?（如果你有机会去地球上的任何一个地方,你会选择去哪?）
2）What will you do while you are there?（你会在那个地方做些什么）
3）How long will you stay （你会在那停留多长时间）
4）What is the actual reason that stops you from going there now
5）Someday,if a new venue comes to your mind,will you still stick to your first choice?（如果有一天 想到一个新的旅游胜地 你还会把（原来的）作为首选之地吗?）
3.Money &Happiness
1）What do you think about money （你对钱是怎么理解的）
2 ) If you have a large sum of money from striking a lottery,what is the first thing you will do?（如果你中奖得到一笔钱,你最想做的事情是什么）
3) If a dying child needs the money to save his life,will you donate the money (如果一个生命垂危的孩子正好急需这笔钱,你愿意拿这笔钱救这个孩子吗?
4) Do you think money has a close linkage to happiness?（你认为钱和幸福关系很密切吗）
5) In your opinion,what is the happiest thing in your life?（你认为最幸福的事情是什么）
【英语牛人团】
1.Hobby
1）What's your favorite hobby
2）What makes you fond of it?
3）How often do you do it （大概隔多长时间进行一次）
4）What benefits did you get from the hobby （让你从爱好中受益的事情是什么）
5) Would you like to share your benefits with others Why and how
2.tourist attraction (旅游胜地）
1）If you have a chance to visit any tourist attractions in the world ,where would you prefer?（如果你有机会去地球上的任何一个地方,你会选择去哪?）
2）What will you do while you are there?（你会在那个地方做些什么）
3）How long will you stay （你会在那停留多长时间）
4）What is the actual reason that stops you from going there now
5）Someday,if a new venue comes to your mind,will you still stick to your first choice?（如果有一天 想到一个新的旅游胜地 你还会把（原来的）作为首选之地吗?）
3.Money &Happiness
1）What do you think about money （你对钱是怎么理解的）
2 ) If you have a large sum of money from striking a lottery,what is the first thing you will do?（如果你中奖得到一笔钱,你最想做的事情是什么）
3) If a dying child needs the money to save his life,will you donate the money (如果一个生命垂危的孩子正好急需这笔钱,你愿意拿这笔钱救这个孩子吗?
4) Do you think money has a close linkage to happiness?（你认为钱和幸福关系很密切吗）
5) In your opinion,what is the happiest thing in your life?（你认为最幸福的事情是什么）
【英语牛人团】