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Shrek 4
Hello everyone ,today I will talk about the film Shrek 4 Shrek forever after .
It is the fourth of the series,but also the last one,
In this film,Shrek became a father and a husband,after a long time,he has been tired of this kind of boring life ,he wanted to have a day that he is just a monster,when villagers meet him,they will shout,they will run away,but not ask him to show his howl.So he made a transaction with the elf Rambo,but it led to the series calamity,.So he had to try to restore.After all,he did,and he had also learnt a lot.
At that world,a lot of things have changed.But something has never been changed.Just like friendship.
Donkey,he used to be the best friend of Shrek’s,at that world,he had also became the best helper that Shrek had.When I saw this,I could not help sighing this is the friendship,
Donkey was annoying and nosy,I think sometimes Shrek had thought of if Donkey can be quieter,but later I found,this is his Character,everytime he has worried about his friends his way .
Sometimes,we complain,the life bored us,but it’s the life!
就是发上来想要修改语法错误的...
中文翻译(略有修改):
今天我想讲讲关于怪物史莱克4这部电影,它是这一系列电影的第四部,也是最后一部。
在这部电影中,史莱克成为了一位父亲和丈夫,一段时间后,他厌烦了这种无聊的生活,他希望有一天他可以回到当他还是怪物时的生活,当村民们见到他时,他们会大叫,会逃跑。而不是跟在他的后面让他表演吼叫,所以他和小精灵兰博做了笔交易,但这却引起了一系列的灾难,史莱克不得不为了回到正常的生活而努力,最后,他也学到了很多。
在那个世界,许多东西都改变了,但又有许多没有改变。
驴子,他烦人又多嘴。但是,他是史莱克最好的朋友,他两次和史莱克一起并肩作战,帮助他获得成功。以前史莱克嫌他太吵,但是在危机关头,史莱克的朋友们总会帮助他一起度过难关。这就是真正的友谊。
史莱克曾经觉得生活过于平淡,但是这才是生活,简简单单的生活就是幸福。
翻译稿又有写的,改动较多,
请帮我看看这篇英语演讲稿,懂英语的进!
It is the fourth of the series,but also the last one,这句话有点罗嗦,this is the fourth and the last one of the series这样更漂亮嘛.
a father and a husband不用这么讲,husband前的a可以省略
比如the teacher and professor就是指这个既是教授又是老师的人,你这里也可以这么说
你在讲述时有些地方用过完,有些用现完,完全可以统一时态.
Donkey,he used to be the best friend of Shrek’s,这是典型的中文式英文的语法错误,用定语从句比价好,Donkey,who used to be the best friend of Shrek’s