我这段英语介绍有没有问题,请大家指出来,

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我这段英语介绍有没有问题,请大家指出来,
Hello,everybody.I'm very happy to stand here,let me introduce myself.My name is Zach,I'm twenty one years old,hunan is my hometown i'm the only child in my family.I'm graduate from Hunan tongde vocational college,and major in computer application.
In my spare time,I like listening to music,I think good music,Let me have a good mood to do anything.In addition to music,I also like playing computer games.Many Chinese people think play computer games hindered people study.But I think computer games could motivate me to learn English.
I really like English very much,It's hard but I love it,Why?because I believe that via own efforts,be able to speak fluent English.

Hello everyone.I'm very glad to be here.First,let me introduce myself.My name is Zach.I'm twenty one years old.I come from Hunan,China.I graduated from Hunan TongDe vocational college majoring in computer science.
I like listening to music in my spare time,which helps me to be in a good mood.I also like to play computer games.Even though many people believe that playing computer games will hinder people's learning ability,I think it motivates me to learn English.
I really like English,even if it is hard to master.And I strongly believe,that with my continuous efforts,I will be able to speak fluent English one day.

大家帮我看看下面这段英语有没有问题帮我修改一下英语作文,有问题语病的地方请指出来, 我的这篇英语作文有没有错?如果我的这篇英语作文有错,请大家帮忙指出来并教我怎么修改, 这段英语有语法错误吗?如果有,请指出：请大家帮我看看这段简单的英语介绍写得对不对? 帮我看看这段英语有没有什么问题? 请大家指点,这几个句子有没有语法错误,有请指出（不用给我新句子,只要指出错误）谢谢大家帮助求大家帮我看看下面的这篇作文有什么问题,有的话请指出. 大家看看这段文字有没有什么语法问题帮我纠正一下请大家帮我看看这段英文有没有语病?谢谢~! 大家帮我看看,我这段英语有没有什么大的毛病, 英语作文,这句话表达有没有问题?细节方面有错吗?如果请指出,不需要修改整体句式.