神马作文网请英语能力比较好的亲帮忙修改一下这篇academic reference吧...时间紧.
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请英语能力比较好的亲帮忙修改一下这篇academic reference吧...时间紧.
Dear Sir or Madam:I take great pleasure in recommending Li Siqi,one of my favorite students,for admission into your undergraduate program.She is an enthusiastic and determined girl with extremely high potentials.Miss Li normally comes up with new ideas,which sometimes leads us to a new way of thinking.All the work handed to her have been consistently completed with great quality.In addition,she is so reliable that I assign her with important tasks.I know that she participates in a program in Electromagnetic method.Although she didn't know much about it,she really tried to learn more in her spare time.And now,she is skillful in operating the equipments.I have noticed that when Mr Cao,the teacher who is responsible for the program,taught them how to use the equipments,only she took out a handbook and wrote down the procedure and made some notes.The next time I saw the handbook,there are more notes,with some draw and announcements.I talked with her about the procedure,she could express the process explicitly and proposed some new way of operating the equipments in order to make the experiment more easier and efficient.In my experience with Miss Li,I am impressed with not only her extraordinary intelligence but also her ambitiousness and persistence.I am sure that Miss Li will be an outstanding student in any program that she may be admitted to .So I strongly recommend her for participation in his program.I would greatly appreciate it if you decide to accept her.Yours sincerely
还有就是请问觉得这篇的长度内容什么的都合不合适~最好今天白天就能帮忙改出来.
Dear Sir or Madam:I take great pleasure in recommending Li Siqi,one of my favorite students,for admission into your undergraduate program.She is an enthusiastic and determined girl with extremely high potentials.Miss Li normally comes up with new ideas,which sometimes leads us to a new way of thinking.All the work handed to her have been consistently completed with great quality.In addition,she is so reliable that I assign her with important tasks.I know that she participates in a program in Electromagnetic method.Although she didn't know much about it,she really tried to learn more in her spare time.And now,she is skillful in operating the equipments.I have noticed that when Mr Cao,the teacher who is responsible for the program,taught them how to use the equipments,only she took out a handbook and wrote down the procedure and made some notes.The next time I saw the handbook,there are more notes,with some draw and announcements.I talked with her about the procedure,she could express the process explicitly and proposed some new way of operating the equipments in order to make the experiment more easier and efficient.In my experience with Miss Li,I am impressed with not only her extraordinary intelligence but also her ambitiousness and persistence.I am sure that Miss Li will be an outstanding student in any program that she may be admitted to .So I strongly recommend her for participation in his program.I would greatly appreciate it if you decide to accept her.Yours sincerely
还有就是请问觉得这篇的长度内容什么的都合不合适~最好今天白天就能帮忙改出来.
长度上没有太大问题,但是我想内容可以这样改
Dear Sir or Madam:
I take great pleasure in recommending Li Siqi,one of my favorite students,for admission into your undergraduate program.She is an enthusiastic and hard-working girl with extremely high potentials.Miss Li always comes up with new ideas,which sometimes gives us a new way of thinking .All the work handed to her have been completed satisfactorily.In addition,she is so reliable that I assign her with important tasks.I know that she takes part in a program in Electromagnetic method.Although she didn't know much about it,she really tried to(learn more in her spare time.And now,she is skillful in operat(ing) the instruments.In my experience with Miss Li,I am impressed with not only her extraordinary intelligence but also her ambitiousness persistence and persistence.I am sure that Miss Li will be an outstanding student in any program that she may care to enroll in.So I would like to support her firmly in her application for your program.I would greatly appreciate it （if）you decide to accept her.Yours sincerely
参考：英语牛人团
如果还有问题可以找我~
Dear Sir or Madam:
I take great pleasure in recommending Li Siqi,one of my favorite students,for admission into your undergraduate program.She is an enthusiastic and hard-working girl with extremely high potentials.Miss Li always comes up with new ideas,which sometimes gives us a new way of thinking .All the work handed to her have been completed satisfactorily.In addition,she is so reliable that I assign her with important tasks.I know that she takes part in a program in Electromagnetic method.Although she didn't know much about it,she really tried to(learn more in her spare time.And now,she is skillful in operat(ing) the instruments.In my experience with Miss Li,I am impressed with not only her extraordinary intelligence but also her ambitiousness persistence and persistence.I am sure that Miss Li will be an outstanding student in any program that she may care to enroll in.So I would like to support her firmly in her application for your program.I would greatly appreciate it （if）you decide to accept her.Yours sincerely
参考：英语牛人团
如果还有问题可以找我~