英语作文 During this holiday ,I joined a basketball match in my

英语作文
During this holiday ,I joined a basketball match in my hometown,my father was the organizer .so I called my best friends to join us.Some of them had joined high school basketball team,including me.By the way ,we won the last The Whole City high School Basketball League champion,so you can infer it won’t be a terrible match anymore.
I should have met them at home ,but as I traveled with my classmate.I became the last one to arrive home.When I got off the car all my brothers stood in a row and bowed to me,then they said together“Welcome home,young master!” I knew it could’t be a good sign.They started to fight me and said mockingly “ You come back too early?We have waited for you tow days” " I'm so sorry about this"I told them.As long as we could be together,we never care how to enjoy ourselves?Some guys made the computer connect to the 48-inch TV and a great speaker.Can you imagine how great ti was ,they played NBA 2k12 just like the real NBA match .A part of them played majiang ,they pulled on a cigarette with gusto and laughed loudly .Someone even went for a drive ,he was singing relaxing songs while feeling the cool country wind at night.How wonderful it was.Nobody limited us ,no pressure,on worry.Just enjoyed our happiness .We always could’t sleep until deep night,we joked ,slapped sticking and laughed unscrupulously ,What else could be better than this.One night ,someone asked suddenly “What would happen if some parents had these kids like us” Another man answered calmly “ Kill fucking stupid guys” All of us laughing immediately.Most of us did not want to get up in the morning because it was too late to sleep last night,someone came up with a troublesome idea.He put lots of firecrackers in front of the window ,and fired them almost at the same time,wow!It did work .The others got up totally right now and started to catch him angrily .
We advanced the final depend on tow days struggle,we got up early and prepared for this.It must be a hard match because tow rivals can dunk,we faced a severe challenge.As we can imagine,we lagged behind 5 point when the first half left 10 seconds.I passed to our captain ,he made 3-pointers from the right wing as the judgment blew the end whistle .Nothing but the net!So unimaginable We found the confidence during the second half.We took speed advantage,most of scoring is from fast break .It was their ball with 20 seconds.We leaded 2 points .Our coach called a short time-out and told us to use one-one-one defense .Then after the other team missed a shot,our center grabbed the ball so we could pass it around to kill the clock until all the time was gone.When the judgment blew the end whistle everybody shouted loudly,embraced each other.

it was an amazing experience in my summer vocation,i got a chance to sign up for basketball match which was arranged by my father.therefore,i invited some of my best friends to join it,all of them were player in high school basketball team.fortunately ,we won the first palce in City high School Basketball League champion.
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