神马作文网指教,如何修改这篇英语文章.
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指教,如何修改这篇英语文章.
改成初二水平,生词不要太多,更容易朗读为标准.
文章如下：
Plants are very important living things.
Life can't go on living without plants.
This is because plants can make food from air,water and sunlight.
Animals get their food from plants,animals and so on.(这句话感觉不通顺,动物的食物来自植物和动物等……是这样翻译吗?如果是改改,读起来很不舒服.）
So animals and man need plants in order to live.（这里的man 可以改成human或者people吗?man一般指男人,泛指人类而已.）
This is why we find that there are so many plants around us.
兄弟.
改成初二水平,生词不要太多,更容易朗读为标准.
文章如下：
Plants are very important living things.
Life can't go on living without plants.
This is because plants can make food from air,water and sunlight.
Animals get their food from plants,animals and so on.(这句话感觉不通顺,动物的食物来自植物和动物等……是这样翻译吗?如果是改改,读起来很不舒服.）
So animals and man need plants in order to live.（这里的man 可以改成human或者people吗?man一般指男人,泛指人类而已.）
This is why we find that there are so many plants around us.
兄弟.
Plants are very important things for our live.（换一下更顺）
We can not live without any plants. （加强语气）
It is because plants can make their food from air,water and sunlight,And animals are living by eating plants or other animals.(2句变成1句）
So animals and human need plants in order to live.（human比man 更好）
This is the reason that there are so many plants around us.(这样比较通顺）
We can not live without any plants. （加强语气）
It is because plants can make their food from air,water and sunlight,And animals are living by eating plants or other animals.(2句变成1句）
So animals and human need plants in order to live.（human比man 更好）
This is the reason that there are so many plants around us.(这样比较通顺）