神马作文网改错 请英语高手看看呢.原文如下
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改错 请英语高手看看呢.原文如下
I often read English aloud and trying to learn something important in heart.It helps me remember what Ihave learned and form good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and communicate with the others in English every day and my written English is becoming better and better .I also try my best master the necessery grammer knowledge .By this means ,I can express me correctly .That's why I have been learning English.
四楼的怎么不改完啊？我看好你哦
I often read English aloud and trying to learn something important in heart.It helps me remember what Ihave learned and form good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and communicate with the others in English every day and my written English is becoming better and better .I also try my best master the necessery grammer knowledge .By this means ,I can express me correctly .That's why I have been learning English.
四楼的怎么不改完啊？我看好你哦
第一句 i often read English aloud and "try "to learn something important in heart.
如果用trying 可以把句子改为 i often read English trying to learn something.去掉and
第二句 It helps me remember what I have learned and "forms"good habit.
主谓一致
第三句 the others 换成others 没有特指
第四句 I also try my best master,.这里master前面少了to
第五句 Ican express me correctly 把me 去掉 直接说 i can express correctly 加了me就成了中国式英语了
最后一句 that's way I have been learning English 把learning换成studying因为learn表示已经学会某物 没有持续性 因为表示学会了 就是瞬间那一刹那间的动作 就好比die 不可以说have been dead 因为死了就是死了 一瞬间的动作 不可能持续 所以 这里如果要用持续性的 就用study
如果用trying 可以把句子改为 i often read English trying to learn something.去掉and
第二句 It helps me remember what I have learned and "forms"good habit.
主谓一致
第三句 the others 换成others 没有特指
第四句 I also try my best master,.这里master前面少了to
第五句 Ican express me correctly 把me 去掉 直接说 i can express correctly 加了me就成了中国式英语了
最后一句 that's way I have been learning English 把learning换成studying因为learn表示已经学会某物 没有持续性 因为表示学会了 就是瞬间那一刹那间的动作 就好比die 不可以说have been dead 因为死了就是死了 一瞬间的动作 不可能持续 所以 这里如果要用持续性的 就用study