改改英语作文由于演讲比赛,今天仓促中写了稿子,但我觉得不成熟,有些语法错误,请帮我改改,Good afternoon,l

改改英语作文
由于演讲比赛,今天仓促中写了稿子,但我觉得不成熟,有些语法错误,请帮我改改,
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen,distinguished guests and honorable judges:
I’m Jacy from E810.It is my great honour to share my viewpoints on Culture Smart or Science Intelligent with you.
This question is resemble Mother or Fanther,who do you like better.Most of us will chose mother,because when we were young,the song Mum Is The Best In The World told us.
Here I wnna make an analogy,Let’s likened Culture Smart to Mother,likened Science Intelligent to father.Have you evev seen the movie.Let’s come back to qing dynasty
Formerly,as is the nature’s call:we like mother for almost five thousand years,she gives us the most long-standing history of civilization in the world.It is no exaggeration to say that the culture of our country is most brilliant in the world.as it turned out,we have a great distance between our father Science Intelligent.Therefore he give us only the four great inventions of ancient China,which included powder ,compass,papaermaking,and printing,moreover,we didn’t make full use of it,
On the contrary,our brother western countries like father Science Intelligent obviously,Because father gives them many technology which helped them become developed country.
由于百度里字数有限，我的下文用图片的方式给高手看了，放大图片即可看清楚了！改好了再加100！

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