200分求修改我的英语演讲稿
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200分求修改我的英语演讲稿
(Oh,my god! I am so unlucky today.)
But usually,there are lots of unlucky things that happen around us,and they make us worried.Different people have different mentalities to face these unlucky things.Here are many famous people who encounter these unflucky things when they were young,like Edison,like Hawking,like Helen kaller,when they faced these unlucky things ,they choosed the "Never give up".So,they succeeded at last.We should learn from these famous people,and then be calm when we encouter the unlucky things.Only when we beat them bravely can we let these unlucky things become our chances.If you can do so,you will find out that you are a lucky man,aren't you?
En...maybe I'm a lucky boy.
这是我自己写的演讲稿,我才初中水平,可能写的不好,希望大家帮我修改一下语法或是单词不足的地方,可以在适当的部分加上或减去一些句子,只要我觉得合理就行,最好帮我翻译一下,还有起个好点的题目,如果我满意的话,再加上那100分.
(Oh,my god! I am so unlucky today.)
But usually,there are lots of unlucky things that happen around us,and they make us worried.Different people have different mentalities to face these unlucky things.Here are many famous people who encounter these unflucky things when they were young,like Edison,like Hawking,like Helen kaller,when they faced these unlucky things ,they choosed the "Never give up".So,they succeeded at last.We should learn from these famous people,and then be calm when we encouter the unlucky things.Only when we beat them bravely can we let these unlucky things become our chances.If you can do so,you will find out that you are a lucky man,aren't you?
En...maybe I'm a lucky boy.
这是我自己写的演讲稿,我才初中水平,可能写的不好,希望大家帮我修改一下语法或是单词不足的地方,可以在适当的部分加上或减去一些句子,只要我觉得合理就行,最好帮我翻译一下,还有起个好点的题目,如果我满意的话,再加上那100分.
But usually,there are lots of unlucky things that happen around us,and they make us worried.Different people have different mentalities to face these unlucky things.Here are many famous people who encounter these unflucky things when they were young,liisEdison,like Hawking,like Helen kaller,when they faced these unlucky things ,they choosed the "Never give up".So,they succeeded at last.We should learn from these famous people,and then be calm when we encouter the unlucky things.Only when we beat them bravely can we let these unlucky things become our chances.If you can do so,you will find out that you are a lucky man,aren't you?
En...maybe I'm a lucky boy.
En...maybe I'm a lucky boy.