神马作文网帮修改一下英语作文The world needs love
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帮修改一下英语作文The world needs love
You know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.
some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I often play jokes,tell story to them.Whenever this time,they often smile,and I also feel happy.Because we have love,so we feel happy,the world becames beautiful.
So long as everybody show a spot love,the world will be happier.so the world needs love.Come on!
You know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.
some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I often play jokes,tell story to them.Whenever this time,they often smile,and I also feel happy.Because we have love,so we feel happy,the world becames beautiful.
So long as everybody show a spot love,the world will be happier.so the world needs love.Come on!
You know,love is beautiful.Without it,the moon can not goes round; without it,the river will dry.love is indespensble in this world.
When i saw the olders live alone,I will give them more help.On sunday,I will company them,joking with them,telling the story with them and I feel happy when they smile loudly.We love,so we are here and the world became more beautiful because of love.
If we share love with people around us,the world will be more bettering everyday.My friends,come on!The world need love,so do we.
感觉我写的好哈哈.
对了你的英语作文写的太口语化了,写成书面语.
It is said that the world without love like the river without water.I think it is right.In our world,we need help each other.such as.
像这样写,分会高.
GOOD LUCK
When i saw the olders live alone,I will give them more help.On sunday,I will company them,joking with them,telling the story with them and I feel happy when they smile loudly.We love,so we are here and the world became more beautiful because of love.
If we share love with people around us,the world will be more bettering everyday.My friends,come on!The world need love,so do we.
感觉我写的好哈哈.
对了你的英语作文写的太口语化了,写成书面语.
It is said that the world without love like the river without water.I think it is right.In our world,we need help each other.such as.
像这样写,分会高.
GOOD LUCK