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帮忙找一下语法错误! 文章非常短!
My future job
I want to be a singer . because I'm good at singing ,dancing.Also I'd like it too.
To be a singer, is a very difficult road, so I need a lot of skills. For example , singing well,dancing well , expressiveness , appearance ,good personality ,etc. I think , tobe a singer, the first need is sing well. So I need to singing well.
There is no a dream not come true,I am sure I will be successful in the future.
My future job
I want to be a singer . because I'm good at singing ,dancing.Also I'd like it too.
To be a singer, is a very difficult road, so I need a lot of skills. For example , singing well,dancing well , expressiveness , appearance ,good personality ,etc. I think , tobe a singer, the first need is sing well. So I need to singing well.
There is no a dream not come true,I am sure I will be successful in the future.
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singing and dancing
Also I'd like it too.是什么意思?最好去掉,also与too重复啦.
后面的帮你改了一下,最后那个there is no dream not come true是啥意思呀?
To be a singer is a very difficult road, so I need a lot of skills, such as singing well,dancing well , expressiveness , appearance ,good personality and etc. Becoming a singer, I think the most important thing is sing, so I need to sing well.
There is no a dream not come true,I am sure I will be successful in the future.
singing and dancing
Also I'd like it too.是什么意思?最好去掉,also与too重复啦.
后面的帮你改了一下,最后那个there is no dream not come true是啥意思呀?
To be a singer is a very difficult road, so I need a lot of skills, such as singing well,dancing well , expressiveness , appearance ,good personality and etc. Becoming a singer, I think the most important thing is sing, so I need to sing well.
There is no a dream not come true,I am sure I will be successful in the future.