厉害的英语高手来!I have a dream ,but I daren't say my dream is.Now I

厉害的英语高手来!
I have a dream ,but I daren't say my dream is.
Now I dare say :My dream is that I'll be admited to Qinghua University.when I was a child,I had heard the highest school Qinghua.The words often drives my heart.I keep it away for eleven years .However,I am almost make it come true,because I'm not good at studying subjects,my math ,my English,my Chinese and my mixtrue subjects are not good.So,when I come to classroom I often sit there and became sad.I think I have worked hard for two years in the Siner School.But ,all of things aren't change quickly.Where is my seed and where is my gains,but it may be the time .Now,I have been in the Senior three,and I'll face the case of going to university.Although the case is so terrible ,I have nothing to treat it.I often cry with the reason that why I am always in trouble.but as the increcs of age ,I know that cry is no use ,so I became studying.So,when I came into the Senior Three,I have been felling myself to change mind to it is that studying is an important thing.If you want to be good at it ,you must finish the studying quickly and correctly in a sure time,and the most important is that you must know the book well and understand every rule and after that you may do some practice to improve your testing cile .At last you must review them ,because the people's brain is limited ,and it will make you forget all of you have studied it .
At last you must keep a good health and have a good felling.Look,this is a true senior three student.
Qinghua,please open your door,I'm running to you now.

我有一个梦想,但我不敢说我的梦想是… …
现在,我敢说：我的梦想是,我将承认以清华大学.当我是一个孩子,我听说最高的清华学校.语常驱动了我的心.我一直走了11年.不过,我几乎要圆梦,因为我不擅长的科目学习,我的数学,我的英语水平,我的中文和我合剂科目并不好.所以,当我来到教室,我常常坐在那里成了伤心.我想我已经努力了两年,在学校的钢渣.但是,所有这些事情都不会迅速改变.何处是我的种子,而我的收益,但它可能是时间.现在,我一直在高三,我将面临的情况下前往大学.虽然此案是如此可怕,我没有把它.我经常同哭的原因,所以我总是麻烦.但由于increcs年龄,我知道哭是没有用的,所以我成了学习.所以,当我进入高三后,我已砍伐自己,要改变观念,那就是学习是一个重要的事.如果你要善于它,你必须完成学习,并迅速准确地确定一个时间,而最重要的是,你要知道这本书很好理解每一条规则后,你可以做一些实践,以提高您的测试着想.最后,你必须检讨他们的,因为人的大脑是有限的,它会令你忘记一切,你的研究.
最后,你必须保持身体健康,有很好的砍伐.你们看,这是一个真正的高三学生.
清华,请打开你的门,我跑到你面前.