神马作文网会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,
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会英语的进来,帮我看一段对话有没有错,
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
Peter:I'm soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book city?You wanna come with?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,I will eat breakfast.Please wait me.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.
把最后改好的贴出来，也许对别人会有帮助
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is that 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.What's wrong?I got up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.Lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but last night I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,when do you usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday was a special.
Alan:Oh,How do you feel today?
Peter:Just soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book center?Do you want to come with me?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,but I will have my breakfast first.Wait for my call.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.You are lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but yesterday I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
Peter:I'm soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book city?You wanna come with?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,I will eat breakfast.Please wait me.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.
把最后改好的贴出来，也许对别人会有帮助
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is that 9090950?
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.What's wrong?I got up just now.
Alan:Oh,it's very late.It's ten o'clock.Lazybones.
Peter:Yes,it's very late,but last night I went to bed at twenty-three o'clock.
Alan:Wow,when do you usually get up?
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday was a special.
Alan:Oh,How do you feel today?
Peter:Just soso.What about you?
Alan:I'm OK.
Peter:I want to go to the book center?Do you want to come with me?
Alan:That's great!Let's go.
Peter:OK,but I will have my breakfast first.Wait for my call.
Alan:OK,Good bye.
Peter:Bye.
Alan:Hello,this is Alan.Is this 9090950?
后一个this换成that.
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Something happens 改成Anything happened?
get改成got
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
改成：“when do you usually get up”
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
后一句改成“Yesterday was a special”比较好
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
改成“How do you feel today”
差不多就这样吧
后一个this换成that.
Peter:Yes,this is Peter.Something happens?I get up just now.
Something happens 改成Anything happened?
get改成got
Alan:Wow,what's your usually get up?
改成：“when do you usually get up”
Peter:I usually get up at eight o'clock.Yesterday is a particular case.
后一句改成“Yesterday was a special”比较好
Alan:Oh,How are you feel today?
改成“How do you feel today”
差不多就这样吧