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请修改一篇初一英语短文,有错误请在原文改出,一定要仔细!再麻烦大家写一篇一样的短文!
根据提示,写一篇关于姚明生活的短文.
姚明是一名著名的篮球运动员,个子很高.他每天6点起床,6:30和朋友一起跑步,回来后淋浴,8点吃早餐,8:30听音乐,9:00开始训练篮球,12点吃午饭.我们都很喜欢他.
Yao Ming's Day
Yao Ming is great basketball star.He play basketball is very well.He gets up at six o'clock every day.At six thirty he run with his friends.After run,he brushes his teeth and takes a shower.Then he listen to music at eight thirty.Nine o'clock,he play basketball.At twelve o'clock eats lunch.We very like Yao Ming!
千万不要把正确的修改成错误的!
请修改一篇初一英语短文,有错误请在原文改出,一定要仔细!再麻烦大家写一篇一样的短文!
Yao Ming is great basketball star------在is后加a
He play basketball is very well----------He playS basketball very well 这句话谓语动词有两个,一个是is一个是play,显然错了,记住单三后动词加s
At six thirty he run with his friends-----he runS---记住单三后动词加s
After run------------------------------------After running,AFTER后用动名词
Then he listen to music at eight thirty---he listens to music
Nine o'clock,he play basketball--------At nine o'clock,he playS basketball
At twelve o'clock eats lunch------------At twelve o'clock he eats lunch
We very like Yao Ming!-----------------We like Yao Ming very much!
错误太多,句式也比较单一,六点半之类的时间表达可采用half past of ,to ,past 等
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再问: 如果可以的话,请再写一篇与上一样的文章。