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帮改一下作文 就看看有什么语法错误 急用
Hello everyone, this season is spent at home. Read a book in the holiday I went to the library, go to visit the park, also go shopping with my friends. Most of the time I stay at home and watch TV play the game, to help my mother do housework, I have finished my homework. This is my holiday.
Hello everyone this holiday is spent at home. In the holidays, I went to the library; go to the park, also to go shopping with my friends. I stay at home most of the time, play games, and watch TV, to help my mother do housework, I was doing my homework. This is my holiday.
Hello everyone, this season is spent at home. Read a book in the holiday I went to the library, go to visit the park, also go shopping with my friends. Most of the time I stay at home and watch TV play the game, to help my mother do housework, I have finished my homework. This is my holiday.
Hello everyone this holiday is spent at home. In the holidays, I went to the library; go to the park, also to go shopping with my friends. I stay at home most of the time, play games, and watch TV, to help my mother do housework, I was doing my homework. This is my holiday.
Hello everyone I spent this holiday at home. In the holiday, I went to the library and park, I also went shopping with my friends. I stayed at home most of the holiday, I played games , watched TV and helped my mother do housework. I did my homework, too. This is my holiday.
帮改一下作文 就看看有什么语法错误 急用
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