神马作文网请英语好的人帮我修改一下作文,
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请英语好的人帮我修改一下作文,
In class,we watched the short video of Mr.Nick who is a disabled.In video,he gives a speech to some students that makes everyone will possess a will better to life.Yes,this leture also teach me a lot.
Comparing with people who don’t have arms and legs,I think I’m one of the most happiest people in the world.
I can use my hands to write,draw,even play computer games.I can also use my legs and feet run in the forest or on the beach.But I usually have bad mood when I face obstacles.During hard time,I always complain about god is unfair to me however I ignore there are a lot of people ,like Nike,who is unlucky really.
After video,Nick’s smile to life and Nick’s confidence to life impressed me a lot .So we should ask ourself:comparing with Nick,all the difficulties we have are still difficult?
I’m bless my mother for giving me a healthy body.I’m bless my teacher for giving me knowledge.I’m bless society for giving me a life which is happy,steady and affluent.
In class,we watched the short video of Mr.Nick who is a disabled.In video,he gives a speech to some students that makes everyone will possess a will better to life.Yes,this leture also teach me a lot.
Comparing with people who don’t have arms and legs,I think I’m one of the most happiest people in the world.
I can use my hands to write,draw,even play computer games.I can also use my legs and feet run in the forest or on the beach.But I usually have bad mood when I face obstacles.During hard time,I always complain about god is unfair to me however I ignore there are a lot of people ,like Nike,who is unlucky really.
After video,Nick’s smile to life and Nick’s confidence to life impressed me a lot .So we should ask ourself:comparing with Nick,all the difficulties we have are still difficult?
I’m bless my mother for giving me a healthy body.I’m bless my teacher for giving me knowledge.I’m bless society for giving me a life which is happy,steady and affluent.
呼呼~~好久没做家教了~改篇作文也化了不短的时间. 看得出你还是有一定的语法基础的,但要记得,中文的表达和英文的表达是不一样的,学会写英文作文的时候换一个角度去思考问题,有助于提高你的英文, 额...用WORD 文档改的有部分字符显示不出来...