神马作文网帮忙检查一下这篇读后感里的语法错误以及内容缺陷（初二）
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帮忙检查一下这篇读后感里的语法错误以及内容缺陷（初二）
《极地特快》读后感
After watching"The Polar Express"
Christmas is far away for us,because it's a famous western festival.But,in many children's heart,christmas is a beautiful dream,it makes us happy all day.
"The Polar Express"is not only a movie ,but also a dream.The film told us a beautiful story：a boy still believed the “Christmas Father”,but he listened his parents talked the “Christmas Father”was a pretty lie.When the christmas eve was coming,he saw a big,long and golden train stopped nearby his house,he entered the train,and found many children like him.Finally,the train arrived north pole and had a very good times there,such as the christmas tree,"Father Christmas"and many little man wore the red clothes.After watching this film,I felt so magic and beautiful.And also I felt the movie touched my heart.
I love this movie.As we watch it one more time,we also can find many things in it,love and the wish.Never change.
《极地特快》读后感
After watching"The Polar Express"
Christmas is far away for us,because it's a famous western festival.But,in many children's heart,christmas is a beautiful dream,it makes us happy all day.
"The Polar Express"is not only a movie ,but also a dream.The film told us a beautiful story：a boy still believed the “Christmas Father”,but he listened his parents talked the “Christmas Father”was a pretty lie.When the christmas eve was coming,he saw a big,long and golden train stopped nearby his house,he entered the train,and found many children like him.Finally,the train arrived north pole and had a very good times there,such as the christmas tree,"Father Christmas"and many little man wore the red clothes.After watching this film,I felt so magic and beautiful.And also I felt the movie touched my heart.
I love this movie.As we watch it one more time,we also can find many things in it,love and the wish.Never change.
第二行不能用 be far away for应用be far away from.圣诞老人英文名为santa claus倒数第二行can应在also前副词在情态动词后
再问： 还有吗？
再答： 我觉得没了
再问： 时态帮忙看看，都写混了。。。
再答： 没写混,你在描述剧情用的是过去式，因为那是过去发生的.而表达感受是你现在的感受，用一般现在时没问题是对的
再问： 还有吗？
再答： 我觉得没了
再问： 时态帮忙看看，都写混了。。。
再答： 没写混,你在描述剧情用的是过去式，因为那是过去发生的.而表达感受是你现在的感受，用一般现在时没问题是对的