英语短片《换了新的办公室》 请大家检查哪里写的较别扭或有语法错误.
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英语短片《换了新的办公室》 请大家检查哪里写的较别扭或有语法错误.
Our company has moved to a new place .the new building has just finished decorating recently , which is located the old building opposite . The whole 9th floor is belong to ours. it is expected that 140 people can be hold ,this make us feel better than previous area which is splited into bits and pieces. Go along with the growth of the each deparments, it bring up more demands on using conference room, the new place has already owned 3 conference rooms.but I feel the coffee break area is necessary. everybody can have a random talk as well as promote the communication for getting along with each other harmoniously in the break time.
Our company has moved to a new place .the new building has just finished decorating recently , which is located the old building opposite . The whole 9th floor is belong to ours. it is expected that 140 people can be hold ,this make us feel better than previous area which is splited into bits and pieces. Go along with the growth of the each deparments, it bring up more demands on using conference room, the new place has already owned 3 conference rooms.but I feel the coffee break area is necessary. everybody can have a random talk as well as promote the communication for getting along with each other harmoniously in the break time.
Our company has moved to a new building that has been decorated recently and is located in the opposite of the old building.Our company has occupied the entire 9th floor.As it is expected totally 140 people can work there.The new work space makes us feel better than the previous one that was splited into bits and pieces.Due to the expansion of each deparment,the demand for the conference room has increased a lot therefore 3 conference rooms have been set up.However,I still feel a room for the coffee break is needed as we need a place where colleagues can have a chat so to get acquainted with each other during the break.