帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么修改之处,需要全改的话,这是一篇用第一人称来自我介绍的短文.
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帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么修改之处,需要全改的话,这是一篇用第一人称来自我介绍的短文.
具体信息如下:
Name:PanPan(name of a panda)
Sex:Female
Age:3
Nationality:Chinese
Personality:shy、quiet
Hobby:sleeps during the day、 get up at night、 eats leaves .
Hi,My name is PanPan.I'm a three years old female panda.I'm from China and my nationality is Chinese.I'm very shy when I see some strangers,so I often quiet in case.I like sleeps during the day and get up at night.My favorite food are leaves and bamboos.This is me.Do you like me?
呵呵,我就这水平,请多多指教!
具体信息如下:
Name:PanPan(name of a panda)
Sex:Female
Age:3
Nationality:Chinese
Personality:shy、quiet
Hobby:sleeps during the day、 get up at night、 eats leaves .
Hi,My name is PanPan.I'm a three years old female panda.I'm from China and my nationality is Chinese.I'm very shy when I see some strangers,so I often quiet in case.I like sleeps during the day and get up at night.My favorite food are leaves and bamboos.This is me.Do you like me?
呵呵,我就这水平,请多多指教!
应该改为
Hi,My name is PanPan.I'm a three-year-old female panda.I'm from China.I'm very shy when someone approach me and I am so quiet.I like sleeping during the daytime and getting up at night.I like having leaves and bamboos.This is me.Do you like me?
Hi,My name is PanPan.I'm a three-year-old female panda.I'm from China.I'm very shy when someone approach me and I am so quiet.I like sleeping during the daytime and getting up at night.I like having leaves and bamboos.This is me.Do you like me?
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