sing songs in your heart to better you

sing songs in your heart to better you
you should sing songs to praise what God had done for you from time to time.singing songs is not only good for God,but also for your heart and for your mood,it will enhance your immue system and unable you to be full of life,full of energy.when you sing songs,you will feel happy,sunny and carefree.you will get rid of sorrows,depression and disappointment.you will be grateful for what you are and change your bad mood.when you hum a little tune,your will unknowingly rub off on others,others will become better off and happy too.so sing songs loud or in heart will do you great benifit.during the battle,a tune will change all atmosphare and raise the moral so as to defeat enemy.there are a lot of advantage of singing a song.
sorry,there are mistakes,"unable" should be "enable"
"immue"should be "immune".
what do you think of singing songs for God?

What do you think of singing songs for God?
你对歌颂上帝有何看法?
You should sing songs to praise what God had done for you from time to time.Singing songs is not only good for God,but also for your heart and for your mood,it will enhance your immune system and enable you to be full of life,full of energy.When you sing songs,you will feel happy,sunny and carefree.You will get rid of sorrows,depression and disappointment.
有时你应该以歌声赞美上帝对你的恩典.这不仅对上帝有益,也有利于你的心灵和情绪,提高免疫力系统,使你朝气蓬勃,充满生命力.唱歌能使你欢欣快乐,无忧无虑；使你远离悲伤、抑郁和失落.
You will be grateful for what you are and change your bad mood.When you hum a little tune,your will unknowingly rub off on others,others will become better off and happy too.So sing songs loud or in heart will do you great benefit.During the battle,a tune will change all atmospheres and raise the morale so as to defeat enemy.There are a lot of advantages of singing a song.
你会感谢主所赐予你的所有,调整你糟糕的心情.你哼着的歌曲在不经意中已感染别人的心情,使他们也分享了你的喜悦.因此,高歌或在心中默唱都会为你带来很多好处.一首歌在战场上将能改变氛围,提高士气,从而打败敌人.唱歌带来的好处确实不少.
Note：Other than the mistakes you’d pointed out,I have also corrected some others,such as advantages,atmospheres,morale.By the way,this is not a sms,so you can’t neglect all the capital letters just for convenience sake.
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