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Today is my birthday.Pass today,I would been twenty-one years old.Yesterday,I called on some friends and some classmates to my birthday gather.They include my middle school classmate Song and Han .Song take his girlfriend that was a beatful girl that be called Rong .and The classmate of my colleage.In all eleven people .After two years ,I am nice to meet Song again ,and.I am happy to recognized Song`s girlfriend .That is a wonderful day
Today is my birthday.Pass today,I would been twenty-one years old.Yesterday,I called on some friends and some classmates to my birthday gather.They include my middle school classmate Song and Han .Song take his girlfriend that was a beatful girl that be called Rong .and The classmate of my colleage.In all eleven people .After two years ,I am nice to meet Song again ,and.I am happy to recognized Song`s girlfriend .That is a wonderful day
pass today没这种说法的,可以用from now on
I will be...
I invited eleven friends to my birthday party, including my middle school classmates Song and Han.
Song came with his girlfriend who was a beautiful girl called Rong.
Some of my college classmates also came here for celebration.
I've not seen Song for 2 years so I was so happy to meet him again.
Further more, It's marvellous to make friends with his girlfriend. What a wonderful day.
I will be...
I invited eleven friends to my birthday party, including my middle school classmates Song and Han.
Song came with his girlfriend who was a beautiful girl called Rong.
Some of my college classmates also came here for celebration.
I've not seen Song for 2 years so I was so happy to meet him again.
Further more, It's marvellous to make friends with his girlfriend. What a wonderful day.