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我写了一篇英语作文,希望英语高手帮我检查一下语法以及意思用法上有没有什么问题.
I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.
The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.
My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.But I think it will be late,
I think I will have a wonderful time.
另外。我的学生证在操场上丢失了可以理解为My Student ID losts on the playground吗？
I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.
The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.
My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.But I think it will be late,
I think I will have a wonderful time.
另外。我的学生证在操场上丢失了可以理解为My Student ID losts on the playground吗？
My birthday was in July was改为is.
建议不要分那么多段
语法上面没有什么大错误,
但是结构可以修整
我不知道你是几年级的学生
以下是我对你作文的一些建议哈
我重新写了一篇
i plan to go for a visit to yunnan,in order to see my .grandmother and some other people who misses me a lot.As Kunming is the Spring City.I will go there by train with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other( places of interest)用得好O(∩_∩)O.with a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on
I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.since My birthday was in July ,I can not sure whether i"ll be late.
I think I will have a wonderful time
再问： 这个我还没有学这么多，七年级。我就这样写应该可以把。。。谢谢你哈
再答： 恩 好吧 - -浪费了！！！ 不过你没有什么语法错误！ 楼上的 有点考虑得太细致了，你可以把作文拿给你老师看，应该说是没什么问题的
建议不要分那么多段
语法上面没有什么大错误,
但是结构可以修整
我不知道你是几年级的学生
以下是我对你作文的一些建议哈
我重新写了一篇
i plan to go for a visit to yunnan,in order to see my .grandmother and some other people who misses me a lot.As Kunming is the Spring City.I will go there by train with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other( places of interest)用得好O(∩_∩)O.with a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on
I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.since My birthday was in July ,I can not sure whether i"ll be late.
I think I will have a wonderful time
再问： 这个我还没有学这么多，七年级。我就这样写应该可以把。。。谢谢你哈
再答： 恩 好吧 - -浪费了！！！ 不过你没有什么语法错误！ 楼上的 有点考虑得太细致了，你可以把作文拿给你老师看，应该说是没什么问题的
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