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A sandstorm hit Jiangsu A sandstorm hit my hometown on Saturday 20th March. It says that the sandstorm hit more than 13 Provinces. I was sleeping when it started. When I got up, I saw that the sky was not blue, it was yellow. I was staying at home all that morning. The wind blew strongly. Sand continued to fly in the sky. The sandstorm got better in the afternoon, so I went out. The wind was very strong with lots of sand. There was lots of sand on the ground and cars. Many people wore face masks. We could only hear the wind. We had to walk slowly in the wind. At last, I got home. I heard the noise of traffic the next morning. I looked out of window and saw that people were working hard to remove the sand on the road.
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A sandstorm hit Jiangsu
A sandstorm hit my hometown on Saturday ，March 20th . It was said that the sandstorm hit more than 13 Provinces.
I was sleeping when it started. When I got up, I saw that the sky was not blue, it was yellow. I was staying at home all that morning. The wind blew strongly. Sand continued to fly in the sky.
The sandstorm got weaker in the afternoon, so I went out. The wind was very strong with lots of sand. There was lots of sand on the ground and cars. Many people wore face masks. We could only hear the wind. We had to walk slowly in the wind. At last, I got home.
I heard the noise of traffic the next morning. I looked out of window and saw that people were working hard to clean up the sand on the road.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
A sandstorm hit Jiangsu
A sandstorm hit my hometown on Saturday ，March 20th . It was said that the sandstorm hit more than 13 Provinces.
I was sleeping when it started. When I got up, I saw that the sky was not blue, it was yellow. I was staying at home all that morning. The wind blew strongly. Sand continued to fly in the sky.
The sandstorm got weaker in the afternoon, so I went out. The wind was very strong with lots of sand. There was lots of sand on the ground and cars. Many people wore face masks. We could only hear the wind. We had to walk slowly in the wind. At last, I got home.
I heard the noise of traffic the next morning. I looked out of window and saw that people were working hard to clean up the sand on the road.
最终答案：略