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帮我改改语法错误~Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second larges

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帮我改改语法错误~
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,I think you should visit to there .There are many ways of traveling such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling if they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!
帮我改改语法错误~Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second larges
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.[这句话两套主谓,少连词 改法1:将it改为which——定于从句.改法2:it前“,”改为“.”i大写]The water is clear and the sky is blue.All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,[同第一句错误一样 改法1逗号改称句号 改法2:在逗号后加where 表示前一句在从句作地点状语 I think you should visit to there .(to应该去掉) There are many ways of traveling(也可写作travelling 英美用法) such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling[前面已经提过 of travelling 省去更好] if they like.you [y大写]can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!
不知道你现在上几年级 不过要是高中作文显得水平不是很高 要是初中就比较好 从句运用不够熟练 不过有几处写的不错[if you like 这个省略句用得很好]