神马作文网谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3
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谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to become a painter.那个who is lovely.
黄金_shaka和 fhjyming帮忙解释下从句
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My good friend
His name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.
My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.I like painting,my dream is to become a painter.那个who is lovely.
黄金_shaka和 fhjyming帮忙解释下从句
还有：
My good friend
His name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.
There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.最后一个me改成I.
I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.语法没错,但是没必要用从句,
可以改成I like playing with my lovely younger brother.
或者I like playing with my younger brother,who is very lovely.
I like playing with my younger brother,who is lovely.语法没错,但是没必要用从句,
可以改成I like playing with my lovely younger brother.
或者I like playing with my younger brother,who is very lovely.