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帮我找找这里的语法错误
Integrated Marketing Communication with the corporate brand Shape research
Abstract:As the old economy to a new economic restructuring and transition,a most revolutionary breakthrough in the marketing communication concept was born,it is the so-called "integrated marketing communication." This paper on the basic elements of integrated marketing done,then discuss the meaning of the corporate brand as well as his importance.Corporate brand enterprises in the shape of product sales,the overall image of enterprises play a decisive role.This is our business to discuss the significance of branding.Our success is also seeking means to shape the corporate brand image purposes.And the corporate marketing communication through the means of shaping brand image.See the information in a wide range of on the basis of the Integrated Marketing Communication with the corporate brand image-building research,and January 1-depth analysis.Finally,through a number of cases to a deeper understanding of our marketing and brand image of the relevant content.
Key words:Integrated Marketing Communication,brand,image
帮我找找这里的语法错误
这个是什么研究论文或毕业论文的摘要吧,这个单词的专业性很强的,只能帮你找找语法错误了.
晕,你不是拿在线翻译翻的吧?错误貌似多了点.语句不通啊.
1.第三行逗号后的it 改成which 变成定语从句.原来的两个句子间没连词不能直接用逗号并列.
2.the overall image of enterprises play a decisive role.单复数不统一,改成images
3.Our success is also seeking means to shape the corporate brand image purposes.这里面的means你想表达什么意思啊,mean只有当“平均数”这个意思讲才是名词,这里应该用meaning吧.
4.And the corporate marketing communication through the means of shaping brand image.这句话里没有动词= =!
5.through a number of cases to a deeper understanding of our marketing这句话同上,估计你把through当动词用了= =!
语法问题就找出这么多,不过你这段文字意思混乱,建议重新写吧.要不把中文发上来,大家看看谁能帮你翻译.