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大家帮我改改这篇英文日记
我的英语水平很低,请大家看下这篇日记哪里出错.帮我改正下,能说明理由更好.
Monday Oct.1th 2009 sunny
The China found a tate of diamond jubilee at today.
We went to palyground rised jack this morning,the end of,we return to do hostel,Then everybody boot-satap watch dress parade of the network.We had seen to noon,head to the cafeteria to eat lunch,then one afternoon on the dormitory network.National day ,so come through.This,I wish friend happy National day.
今天是中国建国60周年.
早上我们去操场升国旗,结束后,我们回到宿舍,然后每个人都开机上网看阅兵典礼.我们一直看到中午,接着去食堂吃午饭,吃完饭后就在宿舍上了一个下午的网.国庆节,就这样度过了.在此,祝朋友们国庆节快乐!
我的英语水平很低,请大家看下这篇日记哪里出错.帮我改正下,能说明理由更好.
Monday Oct.1th 2009 sunny
The China found a tate of diamond jubilee at today.
We went to palyground rised jack this morning,the end of,we return to do hostel,Then everybody boot-satap watch dress parade of the network.We had seen to noon,head to the cafeteria to eat lunch,then one afternoon on the dormitory network.National day ,so come through.This,I wish friend happy National day.
今天是中国建国60周年.
早上我们去操场升国旗,结束后,我们回到宿舍,然后每个人都开机上网看阅兵典礼.我们一直看到中午,接着去食堂吃午饭,吃完饭后就在宿舍上了一个下午的网.国庆节,就这样度过了.在此,祝朋友们国庆节快乐!
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