神马作文网请改一下这个.100分满分再打个分.
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：神马作文网作业帮 分类：综合作业 时间：2024/11/17 16:05:57
请改一下这个.100分满分再打个分.
Now ,my life has started busying The course,less-time homework and myself
plane all be the busying way I see it is't easy to do well or the best
Let me be busy doing so that Ican't miss my home ,you and other anything
So I think ther is't boring anything in my mind and my heart Because it really
bring all kinds of thougths!But I know that it is necessary
I often tell myself to become strong ,self-control and be full of my
mother's introduction
But no matter how hard I do ,the kinds of thouhgths all be comeing at
sometime So my mind all be growing like this or that!
Althoug the busy and hard work ,I still hide my missing to my home and you
Althoug we met and sawonce each other atone particular surrounding ,I
really feel some feeling that I don't know come up all the time
I know we all are busying ,but I still miss you at some different time and
pionts!
Now ,my life has started busying The course,less-time homework and myself
plane all be the busying way I see it is't easy to do well or the best
Let me be busy doing so that Ican't miss my home ,you and other anything
So I think ther is't boring anything in my mind and my heart Because it really
bring all kinds of thougths!But I know that it is necessary
I often tell myself to become strong ,self-control and be full of my
mother's introduction
But no matter how hard I do ,the kinds of thouhgths all be comeing at
sometime So my mind all be growing like this or that!
Althoug the busy and hard work ,I still hide my missing to my home and you
Althoug we met and sawonce each other atone particular surrounding ,I
really feel some feeling that I don't know come up all the time
I know we all are busying ,but I still miss you at some different time and
pionts!
你的英语水平真的是不敢恭维,几乎没一句对,找我当你家教吧,哈哈