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求高手帮忙改改我的英语作文
关于午睡调查表的作文…提醒词汇为take a nap after lunch (午睡)不考虑文采看看我有哪些错误就行…急用Based on the .We can see thatmost of students have the habit on take a nap after lunch .That is a good news to we learned .and most of students think that it is a benifit .
As far as i am concerned .I need take a nap after lunch everyday .It can make ourselves refresh .Most of students choose at 12:30taking a nap after lunch .and they used to enjoy it about 30minutesI think that it's a good choice .It's need not so long time that we enjoyed
Mostly of students take a nap after lunch at home where themselves `s bed I guess it will be more comfortable than the school desk
In a word .Chinesestudents have a good habit of the noon `s sleeping
关于午睡调查表的作文…提醒词汇为take a nap after lunch (午睡)不考虑文采看看我有哪些错误就行…急用Based on the .We can see thatmost of students have the habit on take a nap after lunch .That is a good news to we learned .and most of students think that it is a benifit .
As far as i am concerned .I need take a nap after lunch everyday .It can make ourselves refresh .Most of students choose at 12:30taking a nap after lunch .and they used to enjoy it about 30minutesI think that it's a good choice .It's need not so long time that we enjoyed
Mostly of students take a nap after lunch at home where themselves `s bed I guess it will be more comfortable than the school desk
In a word .Chinesestudents have a good habit of the noon `s sleeping
have the habit on take a nap ——————have the habit of taking a nap
that's a good news to we learned,and most of students think that it is a benifit -------------it"ll do good to our study in the afternoon,and most of us think so
everyday（每天的）——————every day（每天）
Most of students choose at 12:30taking a nap after lunch -----------most of the students will take a nap about 12:30 （ after lunch）
It's need not so long time that we enjoyed ———it doesn't need too long time .
Mostly of students ————-most of students
where themselves `s bed ——————in their own beds
差不多这些
that's a good news to we learned,and most of students think that it is a benifit -------------it"ll do good to our study in the afternoon,and most of us think so
everyday（每天的）——————every day（每天）
Most of students choose at 12:30taking a nap after lunch -----------most of the students will take a nap about 12:30 （ after lunch）
It's need not so long time that we enjoyed ———it doesn't need too long time .
Mostly of students ————-most of students
where themselves `s bed ——————in their own beds
差不多这些