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高一英语改错题The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end,A

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高一英语改错题
The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end,As soon as the bell rang ,announced the end of the class ,each student couldn't wait to rush out of the classroom .Half an hour late,my good friend Li Ming ang I were on the way back home.Such crowded was the train we took that we had to stand .Thinking the coming Spring Festival and the two weeks' stay with parents,we both felt happily and gay.All of a sudden,I saw a man picking an old lady's pocket of his purse.With the help of Li Ming,I caught the pickpocket and force him to give back the purse to a lady.The thief was taken away by the guard.Praised by other passengers,so we felt proud of what we had done.
只需要修改10处,最好今天啊,马上要用的,十分感谢,顶礼膜拜ing............
高一英语改错题The long-desired winter vacation arrived in the end,A
短文改错一般只有9个错,有一行是对的!
1.announced the end of the class→announcing the end of the class
2.Half an hour late→Half an hour later
3.Such crowded was the train →So crowded was the train
4.Thinking the coming Spring Festival→Thinking of the coming Spring Festival
5.we both felt happily →we both felt happy
6.picking an old lady's pocket of his purse→picking an old lady's pocket of her purse
7.force him to give back →forced him to give back
8.give back the purse to a lady→give back the purse to the lady
9.so we felt proud of→we felt proud of