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Nowadays,the word,"low-carbon" is not a strange word for people ,and the low-carbon lifestyle has become more popular within us.such as that we buy and eat all are low-carbon.we travel select the bike rather than the cars and so on.In a word,the low-carbon lifestyle can be definited that a lifestyle which in order to protect environment from polluting by the things we use.according this definition,we know that the low-carbon lifestyle is necessary and can be good for our environment and eventurally be good for our human being.As a college student,what can I do?on the one hand,I will join in this kind of lifestyle and do like others.for example,I can keep use the things of low-carbon,and save the electric and water.on the other hand ,I also can promote this kind of lifestyle to our family,friends and more people.let they understand that this is not only for the enironment,but also for ourselves.
Nowadays,the word,"low-carbon" is not a strange word for people ,and the low-carbon lifestyle has become more popular within us.such as that we buy and eat all are low-carbon.we travel select the bike rather than the cars and so on.In a word,the low-carbon lifestyle can be definited that a lifestyle which in order to protect environment from polluting by the things we use.according this definition,we know that the low-carbon lifestyle is necessary and can be good for our environment and eventurally be good for our human being.As a college student,what can I do?on the one hand,I will join in this kind of lifestyle and do like others.for example,I can keep use the things of low-carbon,and save the electric and water.on the other hand ,I also can promote this kind of lifestyle to our family,friends and more people.let they understand that this is not only for the enironment,but also for ourselves.
ecome more popular within us 之中 within 应改为 among
such as that 没有这种用法.such as 跟短语,for example 跟句子.
such as that we buy and eat all are low-carbon 这句话很乱.可改为 For example,everything that we buy and eat is low-carbon.
we travel select the bike rather than the cars 改为 When we go travelling,we could take ride on a bike rather than a car.
be definited that 改为 be definited as
polluting改为 being polluted
according 改为according to
eventurally 拼写错误,应为 eventually
our human being 改为 we human beings (同位语)
keep use 改为 keep using
electric 改为 electricity
let they 改为 let them
such as that 没有这种用法.such as 跟短语,for example 跟句子.
such as that we buy and eat all are low-carbon 这句话很乱.可改为 For example,everything that we buy and eat is low-carbon.
we travel select the bike rather than the cars 改为 When we go travelling,we could take ride on a bike rather than a car.
be definited that 改为 be definited as
polluting改为 being polluted
according 改为according to
eventurally 拼写错误,应为 eventually
our human being 改为 we human beings (同位语)
keep use 改为 keep using
electric 改为 electricity
let they 改为 let them
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