神马作文网求帮看这篇英语作文有无错误TAT
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求帮看这篇英语作文有无错误TAT
October 18th Friday
Today we had a physical examination.The doctor not only examined our eyes and heart,but also measured the height and weight of us.I found my eyesight was improved.And we are really growing fast.I hope we can health forever.
初三这种水平正常么……会不会字数太少……英语无能啊求帮忙TAT
October 18th Friday
Today we had a physical examination.The doctor not only examined our eyes and heart,but also measured the height and weight of us.I found my eyesight was improved.And we are really growing fast.I hope we can health forever.
初三这种水平正常么……会不会字数太少……英语无能啊求帮忙TAT
有错误,参考如下
October 18th Friday
This morning all the students of Grade Nine had an overall physical check. I had my height and weight measured first, and then a doctor came to check heart with a stethoscope. I also checked my eyesight. I found that I've grown taller but thinner, and it seems that my eyesight has got worse. From now on, I need to have a more balanced diet and get healthier.
再问： 哇哦看不懂- -好像跟我的意思不太对QAQ
再答： 你的内容对九年级而言过于简单，所以在原有基础上增了一些。除了听诊器你可能不知道外，都是大纲词汇，没什么新词。
再问： 因为我们学的就是这么简单啊T口T 不过还是很谢谢……
再答： 那么请采纳吧
October 18th Friday
This morning all the students of Grade Nine had an overall physical check. I had my height and weight measured first, and then a doctor came to check heart with a stethoscope. I also checked my eyesight. I found that I've grown taller but thinner, and it seems that my eyesight has got worse. From now on, I need to have a more balanced diet and get healthier.
再问： 哇哦看不懂- -好像跟我的意思不太对QAQ
再答： 你的内容对九年级而言过于简单，所以在原有基础上增了一些。除了听诊器你可能不知道外，都是大纲词汇，没什么新词。
再问： 因为我们学的就是这么简单啊T口T 不过还是很谢谢……
再答： 那么请采纳吧