神马作文网修改我英语作文的语法吧
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修改我英语作文的语法吧
Today,my dance class has got over,but i don not want it over.sometimes,i want it start again.
when the winter vacation beginning ,i leave school for home .
in my opinion,except the homework i should do something to let myself have good time and lose weight .so i enrol a class of koren dancing .
during this five day,i do a lot of excercise .it is not only intersting but also very makes me tired.
however ,i love it and i will be better
Today,my dance class has got over,but i don not want it over.sometimes,i want it start again.
when the winter vacation beginning ,i leave school for home .
in my opinion,except the homework i should do something to let myself have good time and lose weight .so i enrol a class of koren dancing .
during this five day,i do a lot of excercise .it is not only intersting but also very makes me tired.
however ,i love it and i will be better
Today, my dancing class was(/is) over, but I really don't want it over. Sometimes I even wanted it to start again.
When the winter vacation beginning, I left school for home. In my opinion, besides the homework I should do something to let myself have a good time and lose weight as well. So I enrolled a class of Korean Dancing.
During these five days I did a lot of exercise. It was very interesting but it also made me very tired. However, I very much love it and I am sure that, in the future, I shall do much better.
能写出来就不错,意思大致还可以,修改的地方不一定都完全确切,有时间审视、体会一下,语言就在于长期的学习与练习、修正与改正,复习与提高. GOOD LUCK
再问： 我觉得你前面改得不错，但 I very much love it ?是个什么东西，很明显改错了吧。
再答： very much 状语：非常的意思，也可以放在后面（I love it very much,不加也可以)；加上这个词组主要是为了加重语气（与后面的much作用类似），同时也是为了行文流畅（因为这一句都是短词)。
When the winter vacation beginning, I left school for home. In my opinion, besides the homework I should do something to let myself have a good time and lose weight as well. So I enrolled a class of Korean Dancing.
During these five days I did a lot of exercise. It was very interesting but it also made me very tired. However, I very much love it and I am sure that, in the future, I shall do much better.
能写出来就不错,意思大致还可以,修改的地方不一定都完全确切,有时间审视、体会一下,语言就在于长期的学习与练习、修正与改正,复习与提高. GOOD LUCK
再问： 我觉得你前面改得不错，但 I very much love it ?是个什么东西，很明显改错了吧。
再答： very much 状语：非常的意思，也可以放在后面（I love it very much,不加也可以)；加上这个词组主要是为了加重语气（与后面的much作用类似），同时也是为了行文流畅（因为这一句都是短词)。