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I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.
For example,there was a time I cannot find my key,so i have to stayed at home until I got it under the keyboard,which made me being late to school.
Also,my room was messing around that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
Moreover,this bad habit even affect my work which directly make me loss my job.
When the first time i went my interview,I forgot to bring a chart with me,so I loss the opportunity to have that job.
Another experience I mix an important document with the waste paper and I put them into shredder,so I was fired again.
Finally,I decide to change it,and I believe life will be better after I achieve this goal.
I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.
For example,there was a time I cannot find my key,so i have to stayed at home until I got it under the keyboard,which made me being late to school.
Also,my room was messing around that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
Moreover,this bad habit even affect my work which directly make me loss my job.
When the first time i went my interview,I forgot to bring a chart with me,so I loss the opportunity to have that job.
Another experience I mix an important document with the waste paper and I put them into shredder,so I was fired again.
Finally,I decide to change it,and I believe life will be better after I achieve this goal.
1.that need to be change ---- that needs to be changed
2.but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
----- especially the disorganezation that causes so many troubles.
3.it cause many inconvenience ----it causes much inconvenience
4.drive me crazy ---- drives me crazy
5.there was a time I cannot find my key ---- once I couldn't find my keys
6.have to stayed ----had to stay
7.late to school ---- late for school
8.was messing around ---- is a mess.
9.that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
---- Every time my friends come to see me,i feel pretty embarrassed.
10.even affect ---- even affects
11.make me loss my job ---- makes me lose my job
12.When the first time i went my interview ---- When i went to my interview for the first time
13.so I loss ----So I lost
14.opportunity to have that job ---- opportunity of that job.
15.experience I mix ----experience was that I mixed
16.waste paper ----wasted pape
2.but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
----- especially the disorganezation that causes so many troubles.
3.it cause many inconvenience ----it causes much inconvenience
4.drive me crazy ---- drives me crazy
5.there was a time I cannot find my key ---- once I couldn't find my keys
6.have to stayed ----had to stay
7.late to school ---- late for school
8.was messing around ---- is a mess.
9.that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
---- Every time my friends come to see me,i feel pretty embarrassed.
10.even affect ---- even affects
11.make me loss my job ---- makes me lose my job
12.When the first time i went my interview ---- When i went to my interview for the first time
13.so I loss ----So I lost
14.opportunity to have that job ---- opportunity of that job.
15.experience I mix ----experience was that I mixed
16.waste paper ----wasted pape