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达人来改下语法错误,中文供参考.

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达人来改下语法错误,中文供参考.
In the great historical period when Shakespeare living was in,social life was turned upside down,people were eager to restore orders,different people had the debut,the gullies of human nature isfully emerge what rare to see in usual time.More importantly,the dramaticgeniuses Shakespeare was born in this age fortunately.Shakespeare conform to the trend of the times,to produced the works praises the heroes who dare to fight with the Catholicchurch,society and even fight with the fate of their own.
在莎士比亚生活的那个伟大的历史时期,社会生活天翻地覆,人们渴望重建秩序,各色人物纷纷登台亮相,平常时候难得一见的人性沟壑得以充分展露.更为难得的是,这个时代幸运地诞生了莎士比亚这个戏剧天才.莎士比亚顺应了时代潮流,生产出了歌颂那些敢于与天主教会斗、与社会斗甚至与自身命运争斗的英雄的作品来.
达人来改下语法错误,中文供参考.
living was in改为lived in
is fully emerge改为were fully emerged from
geniuses改为geniuse
fortunately提到句首改为Fortunately,
conform改为conformed或conforms
to produced改为producing或produced
praises改为prasing
the Catholic church改为the Catholic Church(专有)或the Catholic churches(普通)
society前面加the
fight改为fights或fought(须与整篇文章时态一致)
需要说明的是,文章的整体时态可以用过去式,或者用一般现在时(原因是沙翁是对现代有极重要影响的名人,影响持续到现在可以用一般现在时)