改错 至少七个错误Glad to learn you are coming to Beijing after a cou

改错 至少七个错误
Glad to learn you are coming to Beijing after a couple of days.My family and I are looking forward to your visit but we so glad you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.We have got everything ready for you so as to make your feeling at home.
On the day you arrive,my father and I will meet with you at the airport and in the evening we will have nice dinner party at home I am sure I will like the delicious Chinese food.During the following days,I will show you around many places of interests in Beijing,like the Great wall,where is regarded as one of the Seven Wonders of the World.I believe we will have lots of funs together.
Well,see you soon.Bye.

Glad to learn (1) that you are coming to Beijing after a couple of days.My family and I are looking forward to your visit (2) and we (3) are so glad you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.We have got everything ready for you in order to (4 *) make (5) you feel at home.
On the day you arrive,my father and I will (6) meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have (7)a nice dinner party at home I am sure (8) you will like the delicious Chinese food.During the following days,I will show you around many places of (9) interest in Beijing,like the Great wall,(10) one of the Seven Wonders of the World.I believe we will have lots of (11) fun together.
以下是我作出更正的理由:
(1) 没有 that 不是完全错误.但加入that”是一个较正宗的英语写法.
(2) But 意味但是,因此用and 更适合
(3) 代名词“we后,我们需要一个动词” we + verb 动词
(4) so as to”同意楼上,有“以至于”的意,建议
(a)将“so as to”直接用“to”替换,
(b) in order to 为了…起见
(5) Feeling 指情绪 ,feel 指觉得,感觉.
Feel at home = 感到宾至如归,是英语常用语法 = 成语.
(6) Meet with you它是指一段时间.意味会议或活动.
meet you at ___,指在一个地方,及特定的一个时间
(7) Dinner 是一个名词,需要加 a,an,the.
在这里,我们需要一个 ” a”
(8) You 指对方会喜欢
(9) Interest不能说数目的字,不能加š
(10) 两种方法来写:
(a) 用逗号就足够了,没有必要使用 where or which.
(b) 如果你真的需要加,which 比 where 较正确的
(11) 理由与 #9 (interest) 相同,不能说数目的字,不能加š
feel at home 参考资料 - 英语成语字典网页
nglish.com/reference/idioms/feel+at+home.html