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请高手们找错误并帮助我把文章改得更好
MILITARY TRAINING
we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particularity of P.R.china is collegian need not go into military camp.TO let them experience the toilsomeness of military .collegions must have military training in the beginning of grade one .after seven days toilsome training .i learn a lot of things i never come into contact with.
请高手们将我的错误明确得指出来！
MILITARY TRAINING
we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particularity of P.R.china is collegian need not go into military camp.TO let them experience the toilsomeness of military .collegions must have military training in the beginning of grade one .after seven days toilsome training .i learn a lot of things i never come into contact with.
请高手们将我的错误明确得指出来！
we have experienced the life in army for seven days,which is tough but interesting.As far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.However,the situation in P.R.china is quite different,for collegians don't have to go to military camp.In order to let them experience the toilsomeness of military ,collegions must process military training at the beginning of freshman year .After seven days toilsome training ,i've learned a lot of things i've never experienced.
请高手们找错误并帮助我把文章改得更好
请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账.
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请您帮助对题目做具体解析,以便我更好的了解错误的原因,
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