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求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊

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求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊
From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople's
help,which reflects the warmth of our society
In case of emergency,the people passing the accident scene choosed to spare no effort to save
the man instead of ignoring him .Besides,however terrible the sitution is,they never gave up.Therefore,what imressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit,which i think account for the survival of
the man
求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊
From the passage,i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with the help of others'.This reflected the warmth of our society.
In case of emergency,passerbys who witnessed the accident chose to spare no effort to save
the man instead of ignoring him .Despite the terrible situation,they never gave up.Therefore,what impressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit,which i think account for the survival of the man.
为什么是self-sacrifice spirit
再问: 无私的奉献精神
再答: 我觉得应该是热心助人吧,不过写self-sacrifice spirit也可以,你也可以写what impressed me most is their act of landind a helping hand to a stranger who needs help at that point of time, which i think account for the survival of the man.