老师您好，请老师对这篇英语作文进行批改，谢谢您。 要求是：任选两个国家的三个方面进行对比 Now, most peopl

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要求是：任选两个国家的三个方面进行对比 Now, most people dream of traveling other countries. In fact, people want to know more about other countries information than before. There are many differences information between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. These differences include population, transportation, and education of people. Firstly, the difference that is the population between China and Japan. In China, there has 1.3-1.4 billion people. Therefore, China is the country with the largest population in the world. Although, Japan has more than 100 million people, it has much smaller population than China. In particular, the capital city’s population between China and Japan is much differences. In Beijing, there has 20 million people. However, in Tokyo, there also has more than 13 million people. As you all know, Tokyo’s area is much smaller than Beijing, but why somebody thinks that Beijing is much more crowded than Tokyo? I think that the main reason is transportation. Secondly, the difference that is the transportation between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. Most of people think that the transportation between Beijing and Tokyo is the same. The reason is that both of Beijing and Tokyo are all have extremely convince transportation. Nevertheless, I think that Tokyo’s transportation is more convince than Beijing’s transportation. In Tokyo, there has two big airports, one port. On the other hand, Beijing has only one big airport and one small airport. There isn’t any port in Beijing. Thirdly, the difference that is the education between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. The most different is that in Beijing, most of school start at September 1^st. However, in Tokyo, most of school start at April. Obviously, they maybe have different date which start holiday. Also, it has an interesting point that, in Beijing, before the holiday, all of the school have a exam. In Tokyo, although all of the school have an exam too, it always start at after the holiday. In conclusion, there are three differences points between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. They are population, transportation and education. For each of point, it always extremely interesting and uniquely.
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解题思路： 13. I think that Tokyo's transportation is more convince than Beijing's transportation---I think that Tokyo's transportation is more convenient that Beijing's. 14.there has two big airports,one port---there are two big airports and one port. 15. Thirdly, the difference that is the education between Beijing ,China and Tokyo, Japan----Thridly, let's talk about the educational differences between the two cities. 15.The most different is that in Beijing, most of school start at September 1st.----Th
解题过程：
1. In fact, people want to know more about other countries information than before 建议去掉information.
2.There are many differences information between Beijing,China and Tokyo, Japan. 建议去掉information.
3.These differences include population, transportation, and education of people ---There differences include population, transportation, and education as well.
4.the difference that is the population between China and Japan---the difference in the population between China and Japan is great.
5.there has 1.3--1.4 billion people---there are 1.3--1.4 billion people.
6.Although, Japan ---than China. Although后的逗号去掉
7.the capital's population between China and Japan is much differences---the capital's population between China and Japan is far more different.
8.In Beijing, there has 20 million people----In Beijing, there are 20 million people.
9.in Tokyo, there also has more than 13 million people---in Tokyo, there are also more than 13 million people.
10.Tokyo's area is much smaller than Beijing---Tokyo's are is much smaller than that of Beijing.
11. Secondly, the difference that is the transportation between Beijing,China and Tokyo, Japan. ----Secondly, the difference in the transportation between Beijing China and Tokyo ,Japan is ramarkably obvious.
12.The reason is that both of Beijing and Tokyo are all have extremely convince transportation----The reason is that both Beijing and Tokyo have extremely convenient transportation.