神马作文网麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
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麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.
第一行Maybe前面的逗号改成句号,At first前面的逗号改成句号.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意：逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意：逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.