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TodayisSaturday,September3rd2011.Igotupat6:45,soIhadverylittletimetocatchtheearlybus.ThereforeIhadto
difficultiesarenothate----weshouldnothatetomeetdifficultieslgota‘D’inmaths---igota"D"(inmaths可以删掉了因为
建议修改如下:WhenIwasalittlegirl,Ilikedwatchingfireworksverymuch.Mycousinwas5yearsolderthanmeandhelovedfir
仰望星空
nowourcountryiscatchingupwiththeotherareasoftheworld,sohowcanwecommunicatewithforeignersifwedontstud
如果是我的话,要改的地方还真不少,比如说“坚强是梦想的种子”一句,梦想本就是一颗种子,实现梦想的过程就是让这种子破土,发芽,梦想的实现就是这个种子已经成熟,已经长成了一棵植株,所以我认为,坚强应该是实
帮你修改了一下,Weallknowthatayearhavefourseasonsthatarespring,summer,autumnandwinter.TheseasonIlikemostissp
!Inourdialylife,somefriendsandneighborswhomwegetalongwellwithmakeusamused.Theyareconcernedaboutusand
AnunforgettabletripIhadanunforgettabletrip.IwenttoTheHappyVallywithmyfriendsthissummervacation.Itonl
1,studentsarepursuitingfashion,pursuit是名词,这个因该用动词pursuing的,一下有这问题的都应该改正2,poureffortsintothesefashion
你的题目不能很好地突出“不经历风雨哪见得了彩虹”这个主题,我记得我也写过关于这个主题的作文,看你的内容写什么咯,最好要突出主题.
thatphonesaregraduallytakingtheletter--lettershaven'tevenonoursides--byoursidegoingon--gettingonthep
Thoughintheamusementparkhaverollarcoaster,andshecouldalsoboating,climbing,flyingkitesandsoon.这句话改成Th
先看看语法~Lastweek,Isawapeoplewastingwaterintherestroom.people是复数,person才是单数.→Lastweek,Isawapersonwastin
我简要讲几点吧:1,开头的“sorry”按照中文表述没有问题,但是英语语境里面换做表示“遗憾”的“regret”一词更加通顺;2,“becauseofthat”也是同样的原因,你应该更加适应英语语境,
Attendmybrother’sweddingMaythisyear,IwenttoHeilongjiangprovincetoattendmybrother’swedding.Wewentther
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检查呼吸道有没肿瘤其他就没事了
建议改成:Iwenttotheplaygroundandplayedbasketballthismorning.Iwentthereearly.Iwastheonlyoneintheplaygroun
这篇文章有大量引用,比如,名人:朱自清、鲁迅、孔子……等等.这样据有说服力,可以让人觉得要珍惜时间,如果浪费时间,会让人觉得惋惜才达到了这篇文章的目的,这篇文章才算成功!我很欣赏这篇文章,其主要原因是