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书面表达（满分30） 问题要求是：人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请以“Working Individually or Working in a Team"为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文： 1.独立完成：自己解决问题； 2.合作完成：一起讨论。相互学习； 3.我喜欢的方式及理由 词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出： Working Individually or Working in a Team. 开头：There are basically two ways to get work done. One is working individually and another one is working in a term. We must arrange anything and solve problems by ourselves when we work individually . We can discuss and learn form each other when we work in a tearm and It also foster team spirit. In my opinion.I like to work in a team because I think we can improve ourselves and finish working fast by others people.
解题思路： 1.看清作文的要求 2.语言通顺 3.无语法错误
解题过程：
同学你好!欢迎提问.
我认为你的作文总体上不错,是根据要求写的,只是某些词汇最好改进以下:
1.another应改为the other
2.foster team spirit.应改为fosters our team spirit.
3. fast by others people.应改为 faster with other people.
祝学习进步！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学你好!欢迎提问.
我认为你的作文总体上不错,是根据要求写的,只是某些词汇最好改进以下:
1.another应改为the other
2.foster team spirit.应改为fosters our team spirit.
3. fast by others people.应改为 faster with other people.
祝学习进步！
最终答案：略