神马作文网英语句子错误,语法不规范,求修改
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英语句子错误,语法不规范,求修改
According to his father's will,a boy,only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never had stained his name with a public act of dishonor,meanness,cowardice,or wrong.译文：根据他父亲的遗嘱,如果是个男孩,（注：这个男孩是奥利佛）,则必须符合一个条件,即他到法定年龄之前不得已任何不名誉,下流的,卑怯的或违法的行为玷污它的姓氏.
求修改语法.
这句话原摘录于《雾都孤儿》原著,按理来说,不应该有语法问题,但是句酷提示有语法问题,前面根据父亲的遗嘱,是我自己写的.剩下后面都是原著里面的原句,建议原句不要修改
补充：如果修改不是很好,建议修改前,先试着在句酷批改网,www.pigai.org里面修改.看看怎么修改比较合适,我试了很多次都是有语法问题,
According to his father's will,a boy,only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never had stained his name with a public act of dishonor,meanness,cowardice,or wrong.译文：根据他父亲的遗嘱,如果是个男孩,（注：这个男孩是奥利佛）,则必须符合一个条件,即他到法定年龄之前不得已任何不名誉,下流的,卑怯的或违法的行为玷污它的姓氏.
求修改语法.
这句话原摘录于《雾都孤儿》原著,按理来说,不应该有语法问题,但是句酷提示有语法问题,前面根据父亲的遗嘱,是我自己写的.剩下后面都是原著里面的原句,建议原句不要修改
补充：如果修改不是很好,建议修改前,先试着在句酷批改网,www.pigai.org里面修改.看看怎么修改比较合适,我试了很多次都是有语法问题,
我刚搜了一下,你写的这句之所以总被认为有错是因为原文是个省略句,因为它是两个并列分句里的后一个分句,所以省略了好几个成分：
if it were a girl,it was to inherit the money unconditionally; but if a boy,only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never have ...
原文其实说完整了是：...if it were a boy,it was to inherit the money only on the stipulation that...
你把according to his father's will 加到这样一句上,就不会显示有错了.
再问： 确实是少了你说的那句，我照你说的那样修改完了，不过我用句酷批改网，句酷提示还是有语法不规范的问题，我不清楚在哪？句酷批改网网站是www.pigai.org 这个是我们英语专业毕业论文老师给的网址，可信赖的
再答： 我把句子改成这样的时候得了43.5分：
According to his father's will, if it were a boy, it was to inherit the money only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never had stained his name with a public act of dishonor, meanness, cowardice, or wrongness.
评语是：
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础较为扎实；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
【这样能过关吗？我觉得原文因为时代关系，很多用法现在都不说了，所以句酷批改以现代英语的标准判断它，总是认为有问题。】
再问： 恩，是的，所以愁啊，不知到底有没有问题，我个人认为是没问题的。
再答： 不客气，希望能帮上忙。
if it were a girl,it was to inherit the money unconditionally; but if a boy,only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never have ...
原文其实说完整了是：...if it were a boy,it was to inherit the money only on the stipulation that...
你把according to his father's will 加到这样一句上,就不会显示有错了.
再问： 确实是少了你说的那句，我照你说的那样修改完了，不过我用句酷批改网，句酷提示还是有语法不规范的问题，我不清楚在哪？句酷批改网网站是www.pigai.org 这个是我们英语专业毕业论文老师给的网址，可信赖的
再答： 我把句子改成这样的时候得了43.5分：
According to his father's will, if it were a boy, it was to inherit the money only on the stipulation that in his minority he should never had stained his name with a public act of dishonor, meanness, cowardice, or wrongness.
评语是：
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法基础较为扎实；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
【这样能过关吗？我觉得原文因为时代关系，很多用法现在都不说了，所以句酷批改以现代英语的标准判断它，总是认为有问题。】
再问： 恩，是的，所以愁啊，不知到底有没有问题，我个人认为是没问题的。
再答： 不客气，希望能帮上忙。