神马作文网帮忙修改一下英语自我简介,主要是语法错误,小升初用的
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帮忙修改一下英语自我简介,主要是语法错误,小升初用的
Hello.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name isXXX.Presently attending XXX.i’m XX years old.
I am very fond of history.I have broad interests to fill my spare time like many other youngers.I love reading books,especially those about history of China.I like history best in all of my hobbys.In addition,I enjoy study science and go swimming which enrich my mind and strengthen my body.
I always believe that " Do what you can with what you have ,where you are." One will easily lag behind unless he keeps on striving,that is what strongly supports me through those troubles that nearly drag me down.
With all my enthusiasm,passion,energy and aspiration,I’m dream to be a historian that know all about history and help people to discover the unsolved riddle in the historical.
Thank you for your attention.
Hello.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name isXXX.Presently attending XXX.i’m XX years old.
I am very fond of history.I have broad interests to fill my spare time like many other youngers.I love reading books,especially those about history of China.I like history best in all of my hobbys.In addition,I enjoy study science and go swimming which enrich my mind and strengthen my body.
I always believe that " Do what you can with what you have ,where you are." One will easily lag behind unless he keeps on striving,that is what strongly supports me through those troubles that nearly drag me down.
With all my enthusiasm,passion,energy and aspiration,I’m dream to be a historian that know all about history and help people to discover the unsolved riddle in the historical.
Thank you for your attention.
第二段“abroad”改为“wild”,“youngers”改为“youngs” “about history of china”history前面加“the” hobby复数y变ie加s enjoy doing sth.
最后一段 I am dream后面应为of doing sth.help sb,do sth.
最后一段 I am dream后面应为of doing sth.help sb,do sth.