神马作文网求高人帮忙指出这段英文自我评价中的错误,修改下,
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求高人帮忙指出这段英文自我评价中的错误,修改下,
我是一个应届毕业生,我对自己的工作能力有很强的自信,因为在四年的大学生活期间我积极地利用了空闲时间为自己积累工作经验,我有足够的上进心,恒心和勇气,这些帮助了我在实习的道路上学习以及弥补了很多,我愿意学,愿意吸收,更愿意创新,我希望工作对于我来说是一个滋养成长的过程,在这个过程中,我不仅会丰富我自己,也会努力的丰富我所供职的单位.
I am a graduating student,I have the very strong self-confidence to own working ability,because in four years university life period ipositively used the idle time to accumulate the work experience foroneself,I had the enough desire to do better,the perseverance and the courage,these helped me to study on the practice path as well as to make up have been very many,I was willing to study,was willing to absorb,was willing to innovate,I should like to work as for me is that one nourishes the process growing up,in this process,I not only couldenrich I,also could diligently the unit which enriched me to holdpublic office
我是一个应届毕业生,我对自己的工作能力有很强的自信,因为在四年的大学生活期间我积极地利用了空闲时间为自己积累工作经验,我有足够的上进心,恒心和勇气,这些帮助了我在实习的道路上学习以及弥补了很多,我愿意学,愿意吸收,更愿意创新,我希望工作对于我来说是一个滋养成长的过程,在这个过程中,我不仅会丰富我自己,也会努力的丰富我所供职的单位.
I am a graduating student,I have the very strong self-confidence to own working ability,because in four years university life period ipositively used the idle time to accumulate the work experience foroneself,I had the enough desire to do better,the perseverance and the courage,these helped me to study on the practice path as well as to make up have been very many,I was willing to study,was willing to absorb,was willing to innovate,I should like to work as for me is that one nourishes the process growing up,in this process,I not only couldenrich I,also could diligently the unit which enriched me to holdpublic office
I am a graduating student.To my work ability I am with the strong self-confidence, because during the four years of university life ,I made use of my spare time to accumulate the work experience actively. I have enough desire to do better, the perseverance and the courage which helped me much in the study of the practice as well as improvement much. I was willing to study, absorb and innovate.I hope that the work is a process which can nourish my growing up .In this course, I will not only rich myself but also my working office.
再问： I was willing to study, was willing to absorb, was willing to innovate 先谢谢你的回答，水平很高，然后这一段我是想起个强调作用，不知是不是合适，是否有语法错误。
再答： 首先你不要用过去式，因为愿意学,愿意吸收,更愿意创新 是你一直以来所具备的本质，应该用“I am willing to ...." 我上面忘了给你纠正过来了，其次你想起强调作用的话，上面的表达法也可以，只是我个人觉得语句上有点累赘。“Meanwhile there are the spirits of studying,absorbing and innovating that I have" 我觉得这样好点！你看怎么样？
再问： I was willing to study, was willing to absorb, was willing to innovate 先谢谢你的回答，水平很高，然后这一段我是想起个强调作用，不知是不是合适，是否有语法错误。
再答： 首先你不要用过去式，因为愿意学,愿意吸收,更愿意创新 是你一直以来所具备的本质，应该用“I am willing to ...." 我上面忘了给你纠正过来了，其次你想起强调作用的话，上面的表达法也可以，只是我个人觉得语句上有点累赘。“Meanwhile there are the spirits of studying,absorbing and innovating that I have" 我觉得这样好点！你看怎么样？