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亲们帮我看看这篇日记有什么错误.
看看语法和英文惯用表达法方面的就行了.真对不起各位了,我已经没分了,要不可以多加一些分的,真麻烦大家了.
I have experienced a fulfilled life today.I enjoy the feeling that everything goes orderly.
Everyone has dreams,but not means everybody realizing their dreams.Because the ones care about the dreams only,but without actions.It just like our knowledge that thoughts are often distinguished from actions.If you did without actions,the dreams are equated to the daydreams.As a consequence,the regrets will become too hardly acceptable to disappoint tears.Therefore,we can't hold our dreams without doing nothing.
Here are 4 sentences shared with you.In fact,they're lyrics.
世间自有公道,The Heaven is fair.
付出总有回报.You can achieve anything with your efforts.
说到不如做到,Speaking should be instead of actions.
要做就做最好.Do it well or not at all.
Then the rest lyrics are also well-known...
这么恐怖！
我其实是想说（第二段）：每个人都有梦想，但并不意味着每个人都能实现他们的梦想。因为这些人仅仅只是去想，没有实际的行动。就像我们所知道的常识所描述的，想跟做是有很大区别的。如果你没有行动，那么梦想也只能等于是白日梦。结果呢，追悔莫及，哭都没用。因此，我们不能只有梦想而什么都不去做。
真希望汉语没问题。
看看语法和英文惯用表达法方面的就行了.真对不起各位了,我已经没分了,要不可以多加一些分的,真麻烦大家了.
I have experienced a fulfilled life today.I enjoy the feeling that everything goes orderly.
Everyone has dreams,but not means everybody realizing their dreams.Because the ones care about the dreams only,but without actions.It just like our knowledge that thoughts are often distinguished from actions.If you did without actions,the dreams are equated to the daydreams.As a consequence,the regrets will become too hardly acceptable to disappoint tears.Therefore,we can't hold our dreams without doing nothing.
Here are 4 sentences shared with you.In fact,they're lyrics.
世间自有公道,The Heaven is fair.
付出总有回报.You can achieve anything with your efforts.
说到不如做到,Speaking should be instead of actions.
要做就做最好.Do it well or not at all.
Then the rest lyrics are also well-known...
这么恐怖！
我其实是想说（第二段）：每个人都有梦想，但并不意味着每个人都能实现他们的梦想。因为这些人仅仅只是去想，没有实际的行动。就像我们所知道的常识所描述的，想跟做是有很大区别的。如果你没有行动，那么梦想也只能等于是白日梦。结果呢，追悔莫及，哭都没用。因此，我们不能只有梦想而什么都不去做。
真希望汉语没问题。
I have experienced a fulfilled life today.I enjoy the feeling that everything goes orderly.这两句表达方法怪怪的,但是语法是似乎没有什么问题.下面一段问题相当多.几乎每一句都要改.楼主还是说明一下中文意思,然后改起来还方便一点,或者大家帮你翻译.
Everyone has dreams,but [it does] not mean everybody [will realize] their dreams.Because the [one] care about the dreams only,but without actions.It just like our knowledge that thoughts are often distinguished from actions.If you did without actions[X],the dreams [would be] equated to the daydreams.As a consequence,the regrets will become [too hardly acceptable to disappoint tears表达方法很有问题].Therefore,we can't hold our dreams without doing [anything].
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Everyone has dreams,but [it does] not mean everybody [will realize] their dreams.Because the [one] care about the dreams only,but without actions.It just like our knowledge that thoughts are often distinguished from actions.If you did without actions[X],the dreams [would be] equated to the daydreams.As a consequence,the regrets will become [too hardly acceptable to disappoint tears表达方法很有问题].Therefore,we can't hold our dreams without doing [anything].
以上并不是全部