神马作文网作文(修改)
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老师您好，请您帮忙在基本意思不变的情况下改一下这个小作文，谢谢。 现在大家都在学习互联网知识，上网很容易，所以每天都有很多人在使用互联网，发送电子邮件在中学生中很流行，根据提示写出意思连贯符合逻辑的短文 提示词：busy；internet；on-line；popular；important part；people’s life Now people are busy learning about the Internet.It’s easy to get on-line,so many people use the internet every day,sending E-mail is more and more popular among students.I think the computer has become one of the most important parts in people’s life.
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Now people are busy learning about the Internet. It’s easy to get on-line, so many people use the internet every day, sending E-mail is more and more popular among students. I think the computer has become one of the most important parts in people’s life.
Sending前面有关加一个and比较合适。因为这是2个句子，前面是逗号标点，中间应该有个连词。其余部分相当好。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
英语的诀窍就是熟练，办法是多背多练。加油吧！Do your best and you can do the best!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Now people are busy learning about the Internet. It’s easy to get on-line, so many people use the internet every day, sending E-mail is more and more popular among students. I think the computer has become one of the most important parts in people’s life.
Sending前面有关加一个and比较合适。因为这是2个句子，前面是逗号标点，中间应该有个连词。其余部分相当好。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
英语的诀窍就是熟练，办法是多背多练。加油吧！Do your best and you can do the best!
最终答案：略